Comments by Winter Born

"Very good write! I loved it and I can see why it was chosen as poem of the day!"
Posted by Winter Born on "land of heroes, dead" by edenscancer

"hatred and rage with such musical eloquence! I love it!"
Posted by Winter Born on "Millimetre No. 9" by island warrior

"You are very good bro. that piece you think is crap is actually kind of elegant in it's horror and rage..."
Posted by Winter Born on "Digging" by SilentStalker

"would that not be a wonderful utopia?"
Posted by Winter Born on "i am a slave" by Jonas

"very elegant. I am sorry but I cannot wrap my mind around the "audibly condemn the life of a soldier" bit. But a war where no one gets hurt... that I can believe in. Even if you would rather blind yourself to the fact that a war of words is still... a war."
Posted by Winter Born on "i am a slave" by Jonas

"That is A truth all right. One I tend to believe most of the time..."
Posted by Winter Born on "the truth" by BrokenAngel

"this raises a sence of emotion and understanding in me that I do not fully understand, and find myself incapable of defining... After reading your write three times the feelings remain, but they are still like trying to hold smoke... I may have to fav this one..."
Posted by Winter Born on "i wrote it because" by Jonas

"Very good write Jonas. Cuts deep and leaves an indelible mark. Though I am confused by the ending... Is that a call to war I read?"
Posted by Winter Born on "i am a slave" by Jonas

"What a wonderful twist at the end... I was really afraid there was going to be some thinly veiled political message in there. very well done!"
Posted by Winter Born on "W.W.A.D. ?" by mysticventures

"...So many things running through my mind after reading both your write and the comments under it. I personally am not wired in the suicide direction...more the opposite really. I can see how this might have an impact on many people out there, but not on the ones that need the swift kick this delivers. As you stated yourself, they are selfish. Thoughts of self only. nothing about the others this action will affect. They have pulled the blinders of pain over their eyes and refuse to take them off. Very expressive write. I enjoyed it immensly."
Posted by Winter Born on "Suicide: a lesson in economics" by Armand

"This was a fantastic way to explode back onto the DP scene! This poem was soft and sexy and sweet with just a touch of humor and hard animal sex... lovely."
Posted by Winter Born on "Soft Sway" by Sin

"Wow! This poem slipped a poison stained blade between my ribs to puncture my heart... I bow before your prowess. Faved."
Posted by Winter Born on "yes..." by worm

"Just for you, Sparrow, and exspecially Sin, I will endeavor to finish this poor ignored story..."
Posted by Winter Born on "making of Sin ch.2" by Winter Born

"Though I am not wired this way, (I tend toward Homicide...) This was an amazing write and would indeed be a loss to all of our worlds if you were to snuff out your light..."
Posted by Winter Born on "If You're Reading This (Suicide Note)" by darkness_descends

""I rape the cross I carved in your flesh..." awsome ending to such a visual piece.. carnality and pain, desire and revulsion... Such a beautiful combination you have hammered out here... Faved."
Posted by Winter Born on "Rape The Cross {revised}"erotika" by WinterGrave

"I do agree with Narcissa, You shold poet more often. every time you do, such powerful works emerge from the ether... Though perhaps the time is what makes them so potent...hmm..."
Posted by Winter Born on "The Reckoning" by elisa

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