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Comments by carlosjackal

"..and I still do."
Posted by carlosjackal on "Chicago: The Ugly Truth" by Six-Out

"Even with that concluding couplet changed, a superb write."
Posted by carlosjackal on "riverside reveries. -a lucid goodbye" by Six-Out

"Yep, still gets me every time I reread this great piece."
Posted by carlosjackal on "a soundtrack to the home of forgotten dreams." by Six-Out

"Stunning work and the title's a knockout..To me, this speaks of talent that is screaming to be heard and find its place in the world..A talent posing as secrets, waiting for right time, right place. The letters becoming stars."
Posted by carlosjackal on "letters from lightswitches [a beach.born existance]" by Six-Out

"Still love this one and more than deserving of POTD."
Posted by carlosjackal on "a soundtrack to the home of forgotten dreams." by Six-Out

"Had to leave my mark just to let you know how stunning and honest this piece is. Write on....Happy New Year, Jon."
Posted by carlosjackal on "battle scars." by Six-Out

"Kirk's comment led me here...Cracking write and tribute. "
Posted by carlosjackal on "city.park [at sundown]" by Six-Out

"Do as she says, Jon."
Posted by carlosjackal on "neoprene." by Six-Out

"The rivers of flames that rage in the unconscious, the subconscious of the brokenhearted. Never to be quelled? Excellent piece."
Posted by carlosjackal on "when ten is twelve." by Six-Out

"*BANG!* You're in my Top 20 ;)"
Posted by carlosjackal on "a soundtrack to the home of forgotten dreams." by Six-Out

"Jon, this one still steals my heart. *turns up the volume*"
Posted by carlosjackal on "a soundtrack to the home of forgotten dreams." by Six-Out

"*MANHUGS*"
Posted by carlosjackal on "until you can't anymore." by Six-Out

"Not shit enough. Try again."
Posted by carlosjackal on "All Apologies (Look Mom, I'm Dead)" by Six-Out

"Still diggin' this..Sends me right back to my teens, with friends, those feelings shared when listening to the music...And no, it's not over, you're staying, you Sixxxy Beast :)"
Posted by carlosjackal on "Nevermind" by Six-Out

"I echo Mikey's comment :)"
Posted by carlosjackal on "secrets[&]stories" by Six-Out

"Alcohol escape in solidarity. This was wrought brilliant."
Posted by carlosjackal on "wishful drinking." by Six-Out

""like taps.like taps." Simply Jon."
Posted by carlosjackal on "shutter.steps" by Six-Out

"Bastard. I've been putting this off for a very long time.."
Posted by carlosjackal on "and the roses were polaroid" by Six-Out

"Fucking brilliant and evoked memories for me. Bloody nice one :)"
Posted by carlosjackal on "something like glass hammers." by Six-Out

"Such tangible yearning..excellent piece and I would love to hear this wrapped in beautiful, deilcate, heartbreaking music."
Posted by carlosjackal on "David & Goliath" by Six-Out

"Reread this again. I really wish I'd written this piece =)"
Posted by carlosjackal on "a soundtrack to the home of forgotten dreams." by Six-Out

"Lilting beauty and intelligence resonating at once is this brilliant piece. And these two lines were the killer stabs.."the world needs a gift. we're tossing pennies in wells and wishing on black holes." :D -Carl"
Posted by carlosjackal on "wake up, dreamer." by Six-Out

"Still love this piece. Pure brilliance. -Carl"
Posted by carlosjackal on "a soundtrack to the home of forgotten dreams." by Six-Out

"You two would make a beautiful couple -Carl"
Posted by carlosjackal on "Sage Francis and I" by Six-Out

"The story told within these photos astounds me...I now have a cracking stiffy. -Carl"
Posted by carlosjackal on "Chicago: The Ugly Truth" by Six-Out

"@=) -Carl"
Posted by carlosjackal on "my body is my canvas" by Six-Out

"This deserves more comments. So much conveyed in the beautiful simplicity of these words. -Carl"
Posted by carlosjackal on "This Is Not America" by Six-Out

"I fucking love you, Jon. *faves*"
Posted by carlosjackal on "The Guide to Being a DarkPoetry Member [pt 1]" by Six-Out

"Honesty and beauty rolled together in one poem. Oh, and integrity, too, to make the hat-trick. Reading this makes me appreciate that my Dad is still with my Mum. Thank You."
Posted by carlosjackal on "every line [goodbye&goodnight]" by Six-Out

""this isn't beautiful"..the situation you express isn't but the way you've used words to form this poem to express the situation IS beautiful. Oh, and stop driving that forklift like a fuckin' girl! :P"
Posted by carlosjackal on "abuelo [tatuajes y memorias]" by Six-Out

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