Comments by carlosjackal

  • "Yeah, silver speaks of the promise and potential of a wonderfully bright future. Gold speaks of past glories never to be regained. Brilliant write!"
    Posted by carlosjackal on "Silver shines" by sIo
  • "Fantastic wordplay...This piece reads like someone who's desperate to get out of an awful funk despite their words to the contrary. Fight on and write on, Jo, you're stunning :)"
    Posted by carlosjackal on "delicious delicacy i hope you die. " by sIo
  • "This is so brilliantly written yet I'm sure you wish you never had to write this."
    Posted by carlosjackal on "Dad." by sIo
  • "To me this represents the other side of living the high life and clubbing it up. And the way you've told that side was both crushing and nailed with precision and beautiful, heartbreaking expression. Knockout, honest, fantastic poetics. -Carl"
    Posted by carlosjackal on "pandora's straightjacket/a boxlike mimcry" by sIo
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