Comments by carlosjackal
- "Possibly one of the all time greatest poems about a prostitute ever written just for its sheer honesty."
Posted by carlosjackal on "the red whore" by Jonas
- "Just the finest outburst and the title fits fucking perfectly with the content and message and.....the feeling of expression on display. You need to return, you fucker."
Posted by carlosjackal on "self-conscious" by Jonas
- "Gargantuan heart, soul and feeling resonating through this from top to bottom. .Wonderful work of art."
Posted by carlosjackal on "painting" by Jonas
- "Ah, I think what Jonas means is that no man, woman, boy or girl should have to choose to fight in a military war or be forced to for that matter. "
Posted by carlosjackal on "i am a slave" by Jonas
- ""but heroin wont cook in/a disposable spoon" Fantastic flowing imagery throughout, this has to be up there as one of your best. Found this via the good capt's fave list, and so glad I did. -Carl"
Posted by carlosjackal on "wallflower" by Jonas
- "This was an absolute philosophical fire-bomb, a treat to read and gets better with each further read, as the words and message leave their mark. Bloomin' fantastic!"
Posted by carlosjackal on "season" by Jonas
- ""but the truth of my spirit tries to reconcile the two." A fantastic last line to this introspection. I loved the hope it speaks of even when the truth of adulthood makes us hate this life and what it does to the free-spirit of innocence. Excellent write."
Posted by carlosjackal on "shaving" by Jonas
- "OK, first the pickiness: 1. couging = coughing; 2. bodyfeels = body feels, or is it artistic license? 3. the or their world? Apart from that this is magnificent. I loved the imagery, dark and full of clarity, which is in contrast to the mood&feeling. "
Posted by carlosjackal on "the first of last year" by Jonas
