Comments by carlosjackal

  • "Like the void, she'll suck you in and leave you a barren, empty soul...Brilliant warning poetry and top shiz."
    Posted by carlosjackal on "Trench." by Mute Serenade
  • "Haha...Only just seen Kirk's comment below! He was indeed humbled and, yes, he is the fucking FloodMaster who put the damn in "damn straight" then sent it spiralling to oblivion! Totes amazeballs tribute spiral stream of consciousness."
    Posted by carlosjackal on "FloodMaster of Greasy Lake" by Mute Serenade
  • "Aaarrrrrgghhhhh! I need to upgrade next payday....This was one capt of a dazzler of a piece and I had great fun reading it. This was the perfect dedication to Kirk and I bet he both loved and felt humbled by such a magnificent tribute :)"
    Posted by carlosjackal on "FloodMaster of Greasy Lake" by Mute Serenade
  • "Kirk nails it about the rhyme patterns.....Loved this one. Great description and brilliant use of that repeating last line for each stanza. Take a bow, this was boomtown fireworks."
    Posted by carlosjackal on "Laugh or Die" by Mute Serenade
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