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Comments by carlosjackal

"Can believe I'm only just finding this bruising classic of a piece right now. Wonderful pen. Please come back with your poetry and flag :0)"
Posted by carlosjackal on "Cattle Never Explode Quite When You Want Them To (try to sleep)" by Mute Serenade

"This is even better than the first time round I read this...Straight to the heart of break up matter and antimatter. Another thing: COME BACK AND POST AGAIN!! :) "
Posted by carlosjackal on "I do believe..." by Mute Serenade

"At last, I've finally done what I said I would! It's mine! On reread, this is even better than the first few reads back in September last year. *raises a glass* TO THE CAPT! :)"
Posted by carlosjackal on "FloodMaster of Greasy Lake" by Mute Serenade

"Now get the fuck back here..chur, chur..."
Posted by carlosjackal on "Laugh or Die" by Mute Serenade

"This was like an abstract prayer to teenage restlessness, boredom and angst. Top skillage penladyship."
Posted by carlosjackal on "poorly drawn" by Mute Serenade

"This is one of those works where it's so hard to comment afterwards other than to say, this was tangible and felt."
Posted by carlosjackal on "Higher than Virginity" by Mute Serenade

"Like the void, she'll suck you in and leave you a barren, empty soul...Brilliant warning poetry and top shiz."
Posted by carlosjackal on "Trench." by Mute Serenade

"This is a great sequel to the original..That hole in the soul where a cigarette-smoking lover used to reside.."
Posted by carlosjackal on "Pillow Smoke II (I forget)" by Mute Serenade

"Yep..Kirk's nailed it again...So subtle....I drank this up, every last drop...Fantastic like a post-orgasmic Bowie lyric."
Posted by carlosjackal on "Pillow Smoke." by Mute Serenade

"Take it to the bridge! This was cray cray fun to read and I'm sure Tim loved it."
Posted by carlosjackal on "A SONG!, A Song?" by Mute Serenade

""I" not "This"...Dang!"
Posted by carlosjackal on "FloodMaster of Greasy Lake" by Mute Serenade

"This shall be back to bookmark this."
Posted by carlosjackal on "FloodMaster of Greasy Lake" by Mute Serenade

"Haha...Only just seen Kirk's comment below! He was indeed humbled and, yes, he is the fucking FloodMaster who put the damn in "damn straight" then sent it spiralling to oblivion! Totes amazeballs tribute spiral stream of consciousness."
Posted by carlosjackal on "FloodMaster of Greasy Lake" by Mute Serenade

"Aaarrrrrgghhhhh! I need to upgrade next payday....This was one capt of a dazzler of a piece and I had great fun reading it. This was the perfect dedication to Kirk and I bet he both loved and felt humbled by such a magnificent tribute :)"
Posted by carlosjackal on "FloodMaster of Greasy Lake" by Mute Serenade

"Kirk nails it about the rhyme patterns.....Loved this one. Great description and brilliant use of that repeating last line for each stanza. Take a bow, this was boomtown fireworks."
Posted by carlosjackal on "Laugh or Die" by Mute Serenade

"Words fail me. This is just so, so good. This is totes brah."
Posted by carlosjackal on "Paste" by Mute Serenade

"Ooh, yes, that last line blew the whole thing up......Brilliant, passionate work.."
Posted by carlosjackal on "Ephedrine" by Mute Serenade

"That harsh reality when a couple are no longer a couple...That spark dampened to nothing. So well wrought."
Posted by carlosjackal on "I do believe..." by Mute Serenade

"Ooh...This is a doozy of a write. Incredible stuff captured here."
Posted by carlosjackal on "I stole this poem from a Drunk Girl" by Mute Serenade

"This is way out wicked and super dope good. Another classic write."
Posted by carlosjackal on "Dexedrine" by Mute Serenade

"I knew this would win. Pure brilliance :)"
Posted by carlosjackal on "A Poem to Poems" by Mute Serenade

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