Comments by carlosjackal

  • "On reread after reread, I love this exponentially more each time. I sincerely hope that you're still around somewhere scribing and squirrelling away excellent poem after excellent poem waiting to see the light if day at some point in the future."
    Posted by carlosjackal on "Love by toaster light" by cadymae
  • ""After a while it doesn't matter if you can prove it or not The life that you lived It isn't you any longer anyway"....BAM! Knockout punch in the first three lines. When I bookmarked this work all that time ago, I didn't have the words so I let the bookmark do all the talking. These words still don't do this piece justice or convey exactly how much I love this work and all your works. Absolute treasure. "
    Posted by carlosjackal on "Swallowing the sword" by cadymae
  • "I hear your cry. You define with such talent making it seem so effortless when it is anything but."
    Posted by carlosjackal on "Why?" by cadymae
  • "Record everything. Even if it feels trite, shite or overwrite. There's a good home waiting for all lines and phrasing. And the single words."
    Posted by carlosjackal on "Lost in distractions" by cadymae
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