Comments by carlosjackal

  • "That ending snaps so sharply...Loved the flow and build up to each "I am on your side" and then more build....*BANG!* Like a door slammed shut. Very nice work."
    Posted by carlosjackal on "Relentless" by 10 Forty Three
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