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Comments by carlosjackal

"Vivid brilliance. "
Posted by carlosjackal on "Nostalgia for the Dead Horse" by Crush_With_Eyeliner

"Still a magnificent piece and well deserved POTD."
Posted by carlosjackal on "We Fought for Seville-Orange" by Crush_With_Eyeliner

"Those last 2 stanzas really kicked it out of the park...The most wonderful of philosophising."
Posted by carlosjackal on "Albert, you're absurd!" by Crush_With_Eyeliner

"It's been a long wait but well worth it..Another piece of magic has arrived."
Posted by carlosjackal on "Death of the Dirge" by Crush_With_Eyeliner

"Still mind blowing..Succinct brilliance."
Posted by carlosjackal on "A Sacred Charm" by Crush_With_Eyeliner

"Magical realisation. "
Posted by carlosjackal on "Diligence in Spacial Dimensions 1 - 4" by Crush_With_Eyeliner

"Shit..Da bomb right here..Love it :)"
Posted by carlosjackal on "An Unfortunate Author" by Crush_With_Eyeliner

"Bam! Great word choices."
Posted by carlosjackal on "A Great Conversationalist" by Crush_With_Eyeliner

"Ha..This bamboozles. In the best way."
Posted by carlosjackal on "Gently" by Crush_With_Eyeliner

"Now THIS is how to express writer's block...Inspirational in that 'tell it like is' sort of way. Brilliant."
Posted by carlosjackal on "Trading math for bricks" by Crush_With_Eyeliner

"Dude, we're due a new poem from you ;)"
Posted by carlosjackal on "An Ode to Women Through the Ages" by Crush_With_Eyeliner

""Drown the rest"...I've only just realised the potential ambiguity of that stanza. Brilliant."
Posted by carlosjackal on "An Ode to Women Through the Ages" by Crush_With_Eyeliner

"Magic. Absolute magic."
Posted by carlosjackal on "She Fucked Me and Left" by Crush_With_Eyeliner

""How the mighty have finally fallen." That line makes me think instantly of the recent revolutions in Tunisia and Egypt..And the rest of the poem made me think of state TVs reaction to such events...Very thought-provoking piece."
Posted by carlosjackal on "Deliverance" by Crush_With_Eyeliner

"How the fuck did I miss this one? Or maybe I struggled for comment? Brilliant, brilliant piece...A muse-crushing tantaliser of a piece."
Posted by carlosjackal on "A Ghost Drives Onward to the Beach" by Crush_With_Eyeliner

"Those last 2 lines....ZAP! Brilliant piece to put into a pocket and read at those times in the day when the muse is low on the radar."
Posted by carlosjackal on "A Morning Occurence" by Crush_With_Eyeliner

"Seared images on the brain. It's surprising how they can turn into something else entirely once on the mind..Nicely done :)"
Posted by carlosjackal on "A way around it" by Crush_With_Eyeliner

""Not written in pencil." Love the intent to not lose sight of the dream especially with that line...Great stuff."
Posted by carlosjackal on "love letters" by Crush_With_Eyeliner

"Brilliant..Another muse-blower."
Posted by carlosjackal on "A Sacred Charm" by Crush_With_Eyeliner

"A choking limbo..No direction and confusion is hell. Excellent piece."
Posted by carlosjackal on "Nihil Obstat" by Crush_With_Eyeliner

"What a brilliant shining beacon of a poem with such a wonderful spin...Fantabulous :)"
Posted by carlosjackal on "A Small Act of Defiance" by Crush_With_Eyeliner

"Happy 30th, dude..Really love the sentiment of this piece and the title is wicked."
Posted by carlosjackal on "On the Occasion of the 30th Anniversary of My Birth " by Crush_With_Eyeliner

"Mmm...I love lapping up those warm cervical juices...Brilliant piece of hornyness :)"
Posted by carlosjackal on "Tongue" by Crush_With_Eyeliner

"Hell yes! Love the positivity of this one :)"
Posted by carlosjackal on "Nil Desperandum #3" by Crush_With_Eyeliner

"This is love. So very well captured."
Posted by carlosjackal on "You Wear it Well" by Crush_With_Eyeliner

"That would make an excellent present :)"
Posted by carlosjackal on "Written by my Father Novemeber 1974" by Crush_With_Eyeliner

"Refreshing."
Posted by carlosjackal on "Exhale; Begin" by Crush_With_Eyeliner

"Has your Dad thought of self-publishing what's in the binders? Even if only to own a copy that can be handed down, it'd be well worth it. It might even reawaken his creative spirit for poetry."
Posted by carlosjackal on "Written by my Father Novemeber 1974" by Crush_With_Eyeliner

"Struggling to comment because this is just so good...Another one to fire the imagination."
Posted by carlosjackal on "Counterintuitive" by Crush_With_Eyeliner

"Is this a rare piece of poetry from your Dad or didi he write a fair bit but this is one of the few surviving pieces? Either way, talented stuff :)"
Posted by carlosjackal on "Written by my Father Novemeber 1974" by Crush_With_Eyeliner

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