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Comments by carlosjackal

"Perfection."
Posted by carlosjackal on "The Silence and the Shade." by TheProphetUntold

"This is truly a fantastic late autumn poem. Winter's breath can be felt and we are reminded of our fragile mortality. Brilliant as ever."
Posted by carlosjackal on "Silent as Soil." by TheProphetUntold

"Absolutely beautiful piece. Every line is crisp and wonderfully crafted. The way you take the haiku form and make it entirely your own is nothing short of fantastic. "
Posted by carlosjackal on "In Gardens Of Grief." by TheProphetUntold

"I went to bookmark this but can't find the bookmark icon hidden anywhere. Nevertheless, this is 100% killer with a lovely lilting and soft wonderful tone. And that enjambment on, "No soft piano/ raindrops on my worn rooftop": Silent Dynamite."
Posted by carlosjackal on "Quiet, Just Quiet." by TheProphetUntold

"The weave, the craft, the details and that ending. Thereâ€™s a film to be made from this. Tim Burton to direct? Definitely Edward Scissorhands-era Tim Burton but not Alice In Wonderland-era Burton."
Posted by carlosjackal on "The Man in the Lake." by TheProphetUntold

"This is the perfect off kilter haiku."
Posted by carlosjackal on "The Martyr's Dance." by TheProphetUntold

"Such a hopeful piece, to me, that gives me inner peace and a warm glow against hard winter times. Brilliant."
Posted by carlosjackal on "Evergreen." by TheProphetUntold

"Intonation, even. Bugger."
Posted by carlosjackal on "The Dreamer, and the Deceiver. " by TheProphetUntold

"I can imagine this read out loud with beautifully heavy intovation. Wonderful and intense piece."
Posted by carlosjackal on "The Dreamer, and the Deceiver. " by TheProphetUntold

"A sign of the greatness that lay ahead.."
Posted by carlosjackal on "1:1" by TheProphetUntold

"Stunning work of tragedy, immaculately written."
Posted by carlosjackal on "A Thousand Suns." by TheProphetUntold

"Gorgeous piece..Wonderful crafting."
Posted by carlosjackal on "She Swallowed the Sky." by TheProphetUntold

"This is so good..Stunning work that, despite its sadness, is beautiful."
Posted by carlosjackal on "A Thousand Suns." by TheProphetUntold

"Brilliance..The fact you wrote this from a personal perspective makes this all the more brilliant. On this evidence, you should keep writing from a personal aspect..Write on, Matt."
Posted by carlosjackal on "The Dragon Carousel." by TheProphetUntold

"What really gives this poem such powerful resonance is that the accident wasn't caused on purpose by a boy but a little girl...Double tragedy multiplied...Brilliant, brilliant piece. *tips hat to the Prophet*"
Posted by carlosjackal on "Playing God, Beneath the Overpass." by TheProphetUntold

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