Comments by The Zebra Warrior
- "what an exquisite piece of peotry...I felt like this lept from a forgotten manuscript of 'Arabian Nights' or something akin..awash with magical rhetoric and fantastical imagery and 'leviathan'....killer word/choice..."
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "The Rope Charmers" by nur hidayah
- "whoa this was excellent...great refrshing use of vocab, detailed and brilliant and a mixture of oblique and clear, metaphors twisting into one another like new fangled lovers....great post here missy "
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Diamond Belly" by nur hidayah
- "reflection/conscious self=muse, etc...such is the language's twists that the poem would be in danger of self-indulgently losing itself, but credit to your ability to carefully attune each line as not to hamper it..."
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "the mirror imp." by nur hidayah
- "it's hard to really start a poem and finish a poem so originally, that ascertains its own weight and dimension in a nameless time...the opening pyschological pressure of the 'furtive muse' (inner self)...and the esoteric but relatable use of mirror/reflec"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "the mirror imp." by nur hidayah
- "I would say this was a jaunty rhymthic ride...perhaps not my fav of yours because of the quick almost freestyle like rap feel of the rhyming lines...however the attention to detail and the landscape descriptions and the overall word choice is what stands "
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "The Green of Home" by nur hidayah
- "exquiste poetry from start to finish, I wish my Saturdays were this eventful, this has such kick it it's words they beg to wrap around a tongue like syllabic seducers"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "The Water Tower" by nur hidayah
- "you know...Poe saw a Death Head moth and drew sustenance from the horrific sound it made and of course embellished its size....this made me think Poe eerie-esque Gothic Romanticism, it was formally seductive and it's word choice was emphatically astoundin"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "The Plucked Moth" by nur hidayah
- "I think people will want you to stay, a small majority will find your work seriously engaging.....please stay, hahaha....send in at least your postcard matey!! :D"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "The Salted Snail" by nur hidayah
- "this was absolutely fantastic....without doubt. You're a talent in the making...how old are you? Maybe you're older than I realise, but this is a poem of some incredible impression....I am impressed :p...you can have a Kit-Kat...hehehe"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "The Salted Snail" by nur hidayah
- "the meter was very taut - hexameters with trailing syllables, I'm not fond of the technical indulgence side of it, I can't be arsed to syallble count - shocking isn't it?!?! But the actual notion of approaching this is formal and the words constructed fal"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "The Dusk White Waif" by nur hidayah
