Comments by The Zebra Warrior

  • "nicely narrative but ringing with melancholy; ghostly, like a spirit looking to return to the earth and do 'mortal' things once more, such as love, despite the whispers of triviality....you have a knack for these themes, I enjoyed the way you connected the dots with the 1st to the last"
    Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "There Are Women Upstairs" by NeroMatches
  • "if only I could fave this...so much seeps thru the emotional to the vivid and back again; articulate as mentioned and imaginative. Love LOVE the sex as strychine/poison analogy. Fuckin hits hard here. Your 'misery' has lent itself to spellbinding poetry (and at such an 'early' age)...I suppose the one danger is that however fantastic the poeyry is, its little comfort, lest a cure, as exemplified by the closing line. Whoever you're struggling to 'love'/addressing here I reckon would be awe struck at such piercing elegiac ad visionary-like words. Pretty incredible nontheless Jules... sad, candid; braincandy brilliance"
    Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "and this boy." by NeroMatches
  • "absolutely outstanding..very reminiscent of Paulo Buzzi's Italien Futurism styles...gorgeous imagery and tender evoctive style with long snetences so unusual these days...tremendous write, NM!!"
    Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Wandering Stars" by NeroMatches
  • "Fuckin A Nero I love it - so much sensory and deep injections of night life and all those arcane trips down shady alleyways and noen parades of places; like Soho bars in London etc - a world beat down in rapid urban delusions - outstanding."
    Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "This Dali Symphony" by NeroMatches
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