Comments by Delphoid-Q
- "in terms of the style and the linguistic level of this piece. Thanx again for reading and helping me improve my poetry. You’re becoming one of my favs too ;)"
Posted by Delphoid-Q on "Shore Side Reverie" by Delphoid-Q
- "Thank you for the crit... The repetition of the 'upon' I must admit I hadn't noticed and will change when I think of an alternative. However, although a contraction might smooth out the 3rd stanza a bit, I consider the 'who have' to be more fitting both"
Posted by Delphoid-Q on "Shore Side Reverie" by Delphoid-Q
- "Thank you. It's always good to know that people connect with your art... I think that's a very good idea. If anyone has any abstract nouns they wish me to do, suggest away ;)"
Posted by Delphoid-Q on "Haikus" by Delphoid-Q
- "I can't quite agree with you that it's 'forever', although i don't pretend to know to much about this. Wonderfully captured, though :)"
Posted by Delphoid-Q on "Rape Victim's Mind" by JiNx
- "We still talk, but she told me our relationship was way too painful, so we decided to end it before we got in too deep. Should have seen it coming, i suppose..."
Posted by Delphoid-Q on "Digital Love" by Delphoid-Q
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