Comments by MESUN

  • "an angel met me with pink roses,that is well enough a thing to hope for. a wonderful string of words. a moving piece as usual."
    Posted by MESUN on "Tear Stained Smiles" by RubyXero
  • "A true testimony as to why you are a friend, a favorite and an inspiration. To say I love your words as well just means you convey the emotion and thoughts I think I have yet to string together. This piece truly mirrors my current state. Be well, and blessed be."
    Posted by MESUN on "Unconvinced" by RubyXero
  • "sounds like the last hell i was in...at least i thought it was hell. i'm sure i have yet to actually find it. nevertheless a good write."
    Posted by MESUN on "Love is....." by RubyXero
  • "endurance. your strength to surive is in itself its own reward. bittersweet (hell probably tastes like ass) at times i'm sure, but it's still a reward."
    Posted by MESUN on "I Wont Ask" by RubyXero
  • "kick ass! in the past few months i too have gotten into the same boat. lotsa smiles, too bad right now i'm gritting my teeth too. (what's with you girls and little meaningless things becoming huge issues when you're on the rag? lol) hope all is well, and keeps going well."
    Posted by MESUN on "2009-08-05 Journal Entry" by RubyXero
  • "it's strange that we can put our sadness into beautiful words. it's like a cruel trick imbedding into language. something like brilliantly colored frogs with enough poison to kill you."
    Posted by MESUN on "Waging the Hunt" by RubyXero
  • "a little voice keeps your mind on reality whenever it starts to wonder. at least it's inspirational for your writing. i'm sure it's also much more."
    Posted by MESUN on "Somewhere in the Distance..." by RubyXero
  • "if you biggest pain is heartache...i don't think that is so horrible. it means you care about the right things, though you may ask yourself why sometime. just don't let it bring you down. love is a pheonix, out of the sullen ashes turned mud with tears, it can rise new. don't let it petrify."
    Posted by MESUN on "*Spring Shine*" by RubyXero
  • "wow, that's definitely a new way to say the things i've scolded myself about many times. specially the part about being with someone who just wants you to pay attention to them."
    Posted by MESUN on "Raw Birth" by RubyXero
  • "i got the feeling this alludes to something that doesn't usually project the darkness that this representation does. what i see it to be is mine and i will keep that way, for what it is to you is yours. a pleasant and stimulating read."
    Posted by MESUN on "Implanted Seed" by RubyXero
  • "Seemed like the climax of a fairy tale. This feels like it needs more after the first read, but after I re-read it, and let it simmer, it left a comfortable feeling and a soothing blanket of contentment. A very pleasing read."
    Posted by MESUN on "Below Silvering Moons" by RubyXero
  • "Yes, yes, yes, yes, fucking yes! Now that just pulled me along and WHAM! That last stanza and final verse, damn, amazing. I felt the cold and I felt the comfort of being back bed, and then the fear and excitement. Awesome."
    Posted by MESUN on "Under Crimson Eyes" by RubyXero
  • "I'm definitely in tune with the last bit, that's why i use a mechanical pencil and carry a extra lead in my pocket."
    Posted by MESUN on "Blurred Stupidity" by RubyXero
  • "have you said these words to her? i'm sure she won't want to listen but that's where you start. i have a feeling you already know that. (toying with an old phrase here) an emotional journey begins with expressing a single thought. i will admit though i am far from someone to give advice in this area. although i will say to remember that we can show someone the way, but it is left in their hands whether or not they'll stay on the path. i'm rambling. keep hopeful, but always ready."
    Posted by MESUN on "Sullen Thoughts" by RubyXero
  • "well, seeing as i'm a twisted fuck...THAT WAS FUCKING AWESOME!! the imagery was the shit, very vivid. I felt the terrible passion, and the pulsating fear. God this is the the very thing I've been wanting to get out, but i've been having some writer's block. Excellent, fucking excellent."
    Posted by MESUN on "Rein of Terror... Pt. 2 ( WARNING: ADULT CONTENT)" by RubyXero
  • "This at first doesn't seem to say much, but I re-read it twice and realized that each phrase said much much more than I first noticed. The "flaking" section I took to represent change, in some form, which itself is a simple idea, but often the details are intricate. I have no problem believing that these simple words thrown together with such precision do represent intricate ideas and feelings. (also I know what spatter is, that's fucking cool. lol)"
    Posted by MESUN on "Beneath the Remains" by RubyXero
  • "Now that, was fucking awesome! That freaking took the feelings The Pit and the Pendulum and fucking beefed 'em up tenfold. I read that and I was actually able to taste the fear. Beautifully done."
    Posted by MESUN on "Rein of Terror ...Part 1" by RubyXero
  • "Very Poe-ish. at least to me anyway. Something bout that whole "i don't understand what i'm reading but as a whole it somehow makes sense" sorta thing. weird, i always like that sorta thing even though it drives me nuts. nice job."
    Posted by MESUN on "Shadowed by Words" by RubyXero
  • "ya know, usually when i'm home, after a hard night at work, enjoying my beer, a buzzkill would piss me off. but this stirs my emotions in a way that i can't help but feel the truth in the course of things. the proof that i'm not the only one "drinking alone". cheers to better times (that better be ginger ale missy)"
    Posted by MESUN on "Fade Out" by RubyXero
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