Comments by Raven
- "This seemed... slightly disjunct in its ways as it flowed. Nevertheless, there's an aching melancholy in the background that left a lump in my throat...especially when the second last stanza hit a chord somewhere deep."
Posted by Raven on "album leaf. [rhapsody]" by Six-Out
- "..What is there to say, really, when the words you've written instill such wordless emotion in the reader? From beginning to end, this is a perfectly woven carpet of feeling. I'm rambling. This is powerfully wonderful. You know it. I'm shutting up."
Posted by Raven on "left-over relics of love and pain." by Six-Out
- "I read this last night, and, being unable to think of a suitable comment in my speechless mind, thought perhaps a second reading would help. It did. I am more speechless than I was before... you are the master poet."
Posted by Raven on "logical-apathy. [my hands are sore]" by Six-Out
- "This was a whirlwind of intense imagery that just kept pounding right up until the end. So many quotable lines, and yet I'm just left with a feeling of "damn...""
Posted by Raven on ".silk.bullets. [rip me gently]" by Six-Out
- "Fuck. What to say? This was a crescendo that ripped my heart out and beat it into a pulp... "Ripped the wings.... watched it die" ... damn... your imagery almost hurts...but you are the master poet, as always... _Raven"
Posted by Raven on "rain- [a painted cascade]" by Six-Out
- "Wouldn't we all die to forget something of our pasts? All in all, awesome write..._Raven"
Posted by Raven on "[crash&burn]" by Six-Out
- ""to end up dead. with a fake smile upon your face.." So true on so many levels, and merely a snippet of a piece that shattered my mind with a frighteningly reality that I know very well. "
Posted by Raven on "[crash&burn]" by Six-Out
- ""burned the bridge I've yet to cross- what luck"...Ripped apart and glued back together with the truth.. I always love reading your words, because they hit hard every time. _Raven"
Posted by Raven on "[living is cliche]" by Six-Out
- ""is that a smile I see? no, couldn't be
for the likes of a life with no stars in the sky is like a heart with no knife buried inside "...and with those words, you hit the nail on the head, my friend..._Raven
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Posted by Raven on "broken bottles and starless skies" by Six-Out
- ""like a lipstick note on a bathroom mirror you can be washed away" ... I remember feeling this way once... you know, you can wash them away, but there are always little smears on the mirror that stay to remind you... ... Beautifully done, though... (not a"
Posted by Raven on "-tears. of_ lead" by Six-Out
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