Comments by SolApathy

  • "A mouse of madness or technological splendor...The thoughts may never properly render. As a machine myself I find I can understand what the mouse is divining to find. Soul or soulless it may never know, but it will never stop searching to understand what it may never know. Drift within the cybernetic antipathy of emotion...Perhaps one day it will cry --a sign of its devotion. I thoroughly enjoyed this write. I feel it is a journey that may never truly end. --Is this a result of programming or a search to find what is within?"
    Posted by SolApathy on "-Madness The Mouse; Part 1, Shadows of a Gunslinger-" by sTr8-jAcKeT
  • "...The winds across my face feel alien in this familiar place -- Feelings long ago left my soul, yet I still feel the wind blow...cold. A graphic write of intense feeling, and how life is transformative by nature. A great read--I think I'll hold onto this one. "
    Posted by SolApathy on "-Beyond The Past-" by sTr8-jAcKeT
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