Comments by xserratedsoulx

  • "i love the part about stumbling too fast...i love how you call the person 'wonder', like in your other poems, how you always call them adjectives like that. but most of all, i love your imagry. beautiful. ~lauren~"
    Posted by xserratedsoulx on "musclerelaxedteenagerNo7" by BeautifulCalamity
  • "that first line, those last few, i want to be what causes you to desert the beautiful'...you write the way i had always hoped to. are you published? i want to buy your book. i want to live in your mind. i want your mind to be my own. ~lauren~"
    Posted by xserratedsoulx on "Burning in the Mysterious Sway" by BeautifulCalamity
  • "that first line really hooked me...i am forever haunted by what a true artist is, and why they feel the way they do, why the passion runs so deep in their blood. you have not given me any awnser...merely something to think about. thank you. ~lauren~"
    Posted by xserratedsoulx on "A Collector Of B/ro\\ke/n Words" by BeautifulCalamity
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