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"...i love the languid nature of it... very slothlike... almost as if you're about to forget to breathe... the emotions would be anger and regret if only you had the energy to pick up the remote control..."
Posted by TheBardOfBlasphemy on "frayed edges [looking for a lighter]" by Six-Out

"... i was about to be anal and copy/paste the true definition of torn... instead let me just say this was good..."
Posted by TheBardOfBlasphemy on "frayed edges [looking for a lighter]" by Six-Out

"get rid of those full stops. they fuck this up... unless you intend the reader to pause at those points... but that doesn't seem to fit... i even read it out loud to check... "
Posted by TheBardOfBlasphemy on "aged paper [and broken glass]" by Six-Out

"on the flipside... i don't dig.the random fullstops... only because you're also using them in the "correct" fashion. What's wrong with any of these: "-" "_" "~" ":" etc... the meaning vanishes out of this here and there..."
Posted by TheBardOfBlasphemy on "aged paper [and broken glass]" by Six-Out

"there are some killer lines in here... and the sense of it is borderline-pschotic, mournful, washed up, strung out, lost and lonely..."
Posted by TheBardOfBlasphemy on "aged paper [and broken glass]" by Six-Out

"this is funny. and it also makes a lot of sense. "
Posted by TheBardOfBlasphemy on "The Guide to Being a DarkPoetry Member [pt 1]" by Six-Out

"Awesome write. Captures the jaded feeling that we have reduced every feeling, vision (etc) to fake-hollywood-sold out crap. "
Posted by TheBardOfBlasphemy on "[bane]" by Six-Out

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