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  • "I just stopped writing because I became someone different, I stopped running away and I started making different choices m, and then I was hurt so much worse. So deeply I felt it in my bones despite my clinched teeth and sorry eyes. I felt I deserved it for the longest time. I hurt so many people because I couldn’t comprehend love in its most basic form. Awareness and consideration, that every action you make may not o let be affecting you. Jesus, I think back and all I remember is how cruel I was to those who were so kind to me and I was not aware, because all I knew was pain and all I was told was everything I did was wrong. I deeply regret the way I ever treated anyone who opened not only their arms but their home to me. I was no ones responsibility but my own and I had no control over even that unless I was out of reach of smothering hands. I will never read this the same ever again in my life because I now know what it feels like when someone just stops caring let alone loving you and it’s like the earth shattering beneath you with not a crash or a cut just the simple knowledge that you, and only you, were just that easy to stop loving. "
    Posted by sIo on "until you can't anymore." by Six-Out
  • "So true, and I'm not sure if that's a good or a bad thing. In any case, I'm glad you're not writing anymore, if it means you're happy."
    Posted by Six-Out on "until you can't anymore." by Six-Out
  • "I've come to the conclusion that poets aren't meant to be loved...rather, we are spun in webs of heartache so that our souls can purge into words. Without pain, there is no art. "
    Posted by dying angel on "until you can't anymore." by Six-Out
  • "Tool is definitely my favorite band.... They r there own classification/ genre in their own... No band has stood close to Tool ... Everything they stand for and their mind set alone is elevated off the charts!"
    Posted by infinitebeing on "bleeding ink." by Six-Out
  • "I enjoyed reading this. The way the lines are broken up, along with the choice of words gives the impression of feeling weak, grasping at something, or struggling. It seems very sincere and reflective."
    Posted by Unknown on "habitual." by Six-Out
  • "It's nice to go back and read old works. I'm glad this one popped up. It seemed to fit perfectly with the way I've been feeling lately. You'll always be one of my favorites, Jon. "
    Posted by Drea on "monet would vomit." by Six-Out
  • "You are the king of personification and word manipulation. I star struck by your unique individualism in each poem."
    Posted by Unknown on "I am your dreams:" by Six-Out
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