Comments by All Members
- "you think that when you read a poem titled your eyes it would be cliched and already overdone, but this wasnt. very well done"
Posted by Unknown on "Your Eyes" by Labitina
- "Really like it. I feel as if the flow of the poem is great. I have to say that the feeling of playful lust you give off through the poem is great. "
Posted by Unknown on "Secret Lust" by Labitina
- ""Like medicine with a warning label" thats the line that really sums it up for me. Really makes you think... but thinking too hard can make you miss out on the real rewards of feeling"
Posted by Lylani on "Love" by Labitina
- "This had me by the first line "If love is so wonderful" from that point I knew I had a peice about the cons of love, definately a good topic. Write on."
Posted by Unknown on "Love" by Labitina
- "I like the rhyme scheme you set up here, very nice, and it flows really well, thanks for the memorable write."
Posted by HeadpatSlut on "Your Gone" by Labitina
- "Very sad, and i can see so much truth in it, from so many different angles...well done"
Posted by Unknown on "Dead" by Labitina
- "best of all luck... it takes courage and determination of will, so much strength to take what I consider full responsibility for who you are... and that means each day deciding who you want to be and working towards that goal.... ceaselessly... more power"
Posted by Unknown on "Junction" by Labitina
- "mmmm carnivorous... may the xstians beware! what values might you ascribe my dear poet? Do you not turn the other cheek? Are you value-creating? Very provocative!"
Posted by Unknown on "Thirst for Blood" by Labitina
- "oh, how I've felt the same for so long. great and powerful write.
~Lilith~
"
Posted by Lilith on "One For Me" by Labitina
- "...So painfully beautiful... I've lost myself before, and this is rather accurate. I really like this poem."
Posted by Thorn on "Lost Myself" by Labitina
- "Wow. I am just speechless. I started reading and it just pulled me in and before I realized it I had read the entire thing. Wonderful. I love it."
Posted by AngelicDemonMelisandre on "Your Eyes" by Labitina
- "Try focusing your energy into something else, other than poems such as this. You can write well, just find another topic."
Posted by Doc on "Take My Life" by Labitina
- "Good emotion through out the poem. Lets someone know how you really feel. It's something most of us can relate to. It's good. I liked it."
Posted by InsipidTouch on "Never Okay" by Labitina
- "thank you so much, you are really an amazing friend I wish you lived closer for those times when I need some one here with me, but over all you have been there for me to the extent of your ability and I thank you for that
~Christina
"
Posted by Labitina on "No One Left" by Labitina
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