Comments by All Members
- "thnx, i couldn't think of anything to go with it that i liked so i left it only two lines"
Posted by Eladrim on "My Angel" by Eladrim
- "I suppose I would be partial to the subject... The mental images painted within this piece are golden... "
Posted by Unknown on "Ice" by Eladrim
- ""Because if pain is a part of life,
Then to escape the pain you must escape the life..." I admit this haunts me a bit"
Posted by Serenity on "A Life of Pain" by Eladrim
- "Nice flow, that was well written ^_^ The last line seemed the strongest, a great way to end it."
Posted by Elise on "Who I Am" by Eladrim
- "awww!! thats so cute! i love how ppl dedicate poems to ppl..it so sweet..i'll have 2 try it :P anway..great write! -Kel"
Posted by Forgotten Angel on "Who I Am" by Eladrim
- "I really relate to this it's an awesome write you had a point and you made it very nice "
Posted by Labitina on "Ice" by Eladrim
- "yeah i was experimenting with a choppy kinda rhyme...wasn't sure if it was gonna work or not"
Posted by Eladrim on "My Last Wish" by Eladrim
- "thanks for the comment, what you said was more than good enough because it's what you felt"
Posted by Eladrim on "You" by Eladrim
- "I read other peoples comments and I feel frightened. I enjoy your poetry but have nothing wonderful like that to say. Let me try; this poem is a great depiction of humanity. We all have felt it at times. Well written. It comes across clear."
Posted by Unknown on "You" by Eladrim
- "I love the comparison between you and the rope, such perfect meaning. Great write."
Posted by Elise on "You" by Eladrim
- "I really do love the way you are with words. But you were never weak, just misguided. And I'm sure they'll forgive and forget. :)"
Posted by Serenity on "You" by Eladrim
- "I like this ... tis very good. Even though you do not rhyme a lot it still flows very nicely as if it were meant to rhyme."
Posted by Unknown on "My Last Wish" by Eladrim
- "Thats very heartbrokenly written. The last lines powerful, full of meaning. I like this a lot."
Posted by Elise on "My Last Wish" by Eladrim
- "this was good. though i didn't quite get "desolace" ..hehe, i'm not sure that's even a word.. desolation?? that seems to work.. i really like the ending too, see? you just needed to clear your mind. ~b"
Posted by blue on "My Last Wish" by Eladrim
- "This has a nice flow..I would like to think that some good will come of this."
Posted by Elise on "Fate" by Eladrim
- "very true, and whatever we think we know is often false assumption"
Posted by Eladrim on "Fate" by Eladrim
- "Fate tosses us all whatever hand it chooses...I try to look at my own life more than the lives of others because we never REALLY know about the lives of others until we know them incredibly well. "
Posted by Unknown on "Fate" by Eladrim
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