Comments by All Members
- "I agree with elise about the rope part. this poem is captivating. your style is real and the way you let the reader touch it is talent!"
Posted by abattoir on "You" by Eladrim
- "burrr...this was cold, driven, maddeningly angry. sick fuckin wrt.I loved it.abattoir"
Posted by abattoir on "Ice" by Eladrim
- "i like this poem..and emily has a good point..lord knows i wear mine 24/7 or almost...when im sleeping i dont..but yeah..anyway..awesome write! -Kel"
Posted by Forgotten Angel on "The End" by Eladrim
- "we all love the mask that hides us because we begin to need it
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Posted by Unknown on "The End" by Eladrim
- "I loved this piece. The story it tells almost seemed fammiliar to me. I can relate to it, and there aren't many poems that I can relate to. Beautifully done. -Cinn"
Posted by Cinn on "Never Stop Fighting" by Eladrim
- "I've read this over a good many times. the lines read me without fail. good expression. favorites definently "
Posted by Full blame on "Ice" by Eladrim
- "how can this be? these are the thoughts that consume me also, except without this ease of expression. good expression."
Posted by Full blame on "Your Touch" by Eladrim
- "great! i can totally relate, it can be scary as hell to be happy, especially when ur not used to the feeling, you never want to loose that feeling to go back....good job you really captured it"
Posted by Just a Rose on "Your Touch" by Eladrim
- "Beautiful.It all reminds me so vividly of a not so long ago past...but easily enough somehow I escaped the whispering and didn't give into cutting...Very very good indeed."
Posted by Unknown on "The Voices" by Eladrim
- "that happens to me sometimes... but it's a hamseter and a leperchaun in there...they scare me to "
Posted by Unknown on "The Voices" by Eladrim
- "This was wonderful hon. So much emotion. You should remove your mask and show people your beautiful mind and soul. Just remember you're not alone. :)"
Posted by Serenity on "Never Stop Fighting" by Eladrim
- "Ouch, short and to the point. Blinded by love and lead into darkness."
Posted by Elise on "My Angel" by Eladrim
- "fantastic and brilliant prose.........simply engaging........well done.........urban"
Posted by urbanhumility on "Fair" by Eladrim
- "even though it's just two lines it says a lot, great write ~ Christina"
Posted by Labitina on "My Angel" by Eladrim
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