Comments by All Members
- "Very well written with lots of description, I much love it as always. -Salem"
Posted by Unknown on "Fair" by Eladrim
- "Too true depitction of war and it's greed and pointless ways... The world isn't far, and it's true, people always want more- only want it because someone else does...Never heard one describe it like this..."
Posted by Unknown on "Fair" by Eladrim
- "More complicated than your other poems. I like it, though. The pain of no help and hopelessness captured in 4 stanzas..
-Salem"
Posted by Unknown on "The Price to Pay" by Eladrim
- "Different than your others. I'm not real religious but I don't like the stereotyping of hell.. meh. I love the first line though. - Salem"
Posted by Unknown on "My Angel" by Eladrim
- "Other than that I love it. I feel like this sometimes, and imagine one friend who might. Lovely as always. I much like it. -Salem "
Posted by Unknown on "Who I Am" by Eladrim
- "Wow. I love all but the treating like dirt. Sorry, I value dirt a lot, as a piece of nature, and it was also worth alot in trading times before money. Just doesn't fit, to me... "
Posted by Unknown on "Who I Am" by Eladrim
- "One thing: The title could explain more of the poem... just a suggestion. "You" is undefined. "
Posted by Unknown on "You" by Eladrim
- "Original is your poetry, I've loved every poem... This one like the others is so deep..dark...painful..."I'm too weak to hold on to you" means so much...
I much love it. -Salem"
Posted by Unknown on "You" by Eladrim
- "Again I love it...you're a great writer...last line is the perfect ending.. Very good words..descriptive..flows nice. I much love it. -Salem"
Posted by Unknown on "My Last Wish" by Eladrim
- "Love it. Last 3 lines are the perfect ending... expressed neat and interesting. It means so much to me personally, i can understand.. Nice work. I much love it. -Salem"
Posted by Unknown on "Fate" by Eladrim
- "Its an illusion we all have and want.. to just escape and be numb, forget the painful memories.. we all like to pretend, but it never disapears... I much like it, although I advise a thesaurus, I do the same in repeating words, and there are so many.. "
Posted by Unknown on "Memories" by Eladrim
- "Again I much love it... You have many different ways of expressing yourself..amazing how poetry can relate two people and mean so much...can't say a word correct but can write a million words in perfection. -Salem"
Posted by Unknown on "Wasted on You" by Eladrim
- "Again, beautful.. the last line may be seem true. it is true life is pain, but death is not the only way... From another angle, we also never remove all of the pain.. so it be true, sadly. I much like it. - Salem"
Posted by Unknown on "A Life of Pain" by Eladrim
- "Ice is a great metaphor. I've felt that way on and off for a while.. it means so much. I will go on to read more of yours ..I much like it. -Salem"
Posted by Unknown on "Ice" by Eladrim
- "This one hits home for me in so many ways. I love the line; "Is it so much to ask that I'm not betrayed?" I've asked that for years! Awesome write.
"
Posted by TaintedButterfly on "Fate" by Eladrim
- "*Sighs* My, how I know this write. You have portrayed these emotions beautifully...and that's all I can think to say. Lovely. *Evangel*"
Posted by Unknown on "These Shadows" by Eladrim
- "Awwww...*embraces the girl in her mirror* So very relatable for me...I know these feelings almost as well as I know my heart...this is, definately, beautiful. *Evangel*"
Posted by Unknown on "The Last Hopeful Plunge" by Eladrim
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