Comments by All Members
- "Leaders will always be cruel: they feed souls to the bowels of war. I understand this work. Brava!"
Posted by Nimue44 on "Fair" by Eladrim
- "Marvelous imagery in this piece, and like the others said, teeming with despair... Seemed to have a bitterness to it as well. Nice write :)"
Posted by Unknown on "Drown" by Eladrim
- "This is definitely not typical. It does have the feel of waves, of have and have not...within a melancholy that would fit in a black and white film, of beatiful beaches awash in circumstance."
Posted by Aunty Depressant on "Don't Kill The Ending" by Eladrim
- "I have boxes of pictures I can't go through, and cringe when other women want me to join scrapbooking groups. I just hide them under my bed. Still a bit too raw. They bring back the feelings."
Posted by Aunty Depressant on "Memories" by Eladrim
- "Now that's what I call heavy metal. Write on!"
Posted by Unknown on "Ice" by Eladrim
- "This poem twists just like the metahor of the road. That innocence described suddenly snaps into a tale of misery. Really shows the pains of love that the protagonist still desires to be picked up and told it's okay. Really enjoyed this!"
Posted by Unknown on "The Straight And The Narrow" by Eladrim
- "The path is long and tedious, but it cements once you learn to listen to them. I really enjoyed it, strong form and doesn't gag on the subject matter - original, with a voice of its own. "
Posted by Brimstone on "These Shadows" by Eladrim
- "despair has a voice.......it speaks here............well done...........urban"
Posted by urbanhumility on "Drown" by Eladrim
- "Shocking loneliness!, I loved this, and cannot explain why. - Michael"
Posted by BlackBear on "Drown" by Eladrim
- "The point is the contrast, One I thought was an Angel (typically a being of light, hope, and all around goodness) led me into Hell (typically a place of pain and torment)"
Posted by Eladrim on "My Angel" by Eladrim
- "don't mean to be an ass, but i see little potential in this. in fact, i feel like i just wasted almost a minute of my life..."
Posted by Unknown on "My Angel" by Eladrim
- "The verses are good in themselves ,but some don't seem to fit, maybe you're trying to say more than one thing at a time with so many different things on your mind... -Salem"
Posted by Unknown on "Never Stop Fighting" by Eladrim
- "Thesaurus could help you describe better.. i like it. try not so hard to rhyme, maybe. I felt it was spaced out.. still great poem, though. makes you think..."
Posted by Unknown on "Never Stop Fighting" by Eladrim
- "I love it. It's interesting I can relate to near all of your poems.. You express your emotions very well, too well. I'm touched again - one thing , why is "darkness" capitalised.. must you mean satan?"
Posted by Unknown on "So Now That You're Gone..." by Eladrim
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