Comments by All Members
- "I adore the structure and your rhyme scheme is wonderful. I love this piece, it had an air of Poe and William Blake intertwined."
Posted by Unknown on "Thy Splinter" by Metal Lullaby
- "I personally enjoyed this more than your two nights dream, none the less, it is astounding. Especially the first two stanzas, you painted a beautiful picture for me."
Posted by Unknown on "One Nights Dream" by Metal Lullaby
- "So pretty.... innocent and pure emotions here. Silken beyond lust or corruption. "
Posted by Unknown on "Hush" by Metal Lullaby
- "I can see why you have Valentine favourited. well written indeed, exceptionally well, indeed. i will have to peruse more of your work."
Posted by Unknown on "Thy Splinter" by Metal Lullaby
- "Oh wow . . this is profoundly beautiful and i am . . speechless. Every line woven beautifully. The imagery is beyond compare; a magnificent piece indeed, that will play in mind for hours, no doubt. Wonderful. Thankyou . . . . "
Posted by Unknown on "One Dance" by Metal Lullaby
- "this is awesome...I love the imagery and the way you present it. and the "thy"s and "doth"s make it interesting."
Posted by Unknown on "Fallen Taint" by Metal Lullaby
- "what a lovely form you have, and i must admit there is a nice quantity of quality words found within this piece, welcome to DP ~kristy"
Posted by Sin on "One Nights Dream" by Metal Lullaby
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