Comments by All Members
- "great work, this was epic, superbly written, the whole piece flawlessly put together"
Posted by Anth on "The Pool" by Gideon Lost
- "~shakes head~ that is so sad to me...it just reminds me of everyting lost and everything out of reach...~sigh~ great write"
Posted by Lydia Jade on "Selfish Prayers" by Gideon Lost
- "when i say the title i was takin back but the poem was very good ~~g.a.p.~~"
Posted by Unknown on "Merman" by Gideon Lost
- "that is by far THE BEST poem i've read in 2 or 3 years and it takes alot for me, good job man i am a huge fan!! keep it upand keep me posted"
Posted by Unknown on "Paper Wishes" by Gideon Lost
- "Damn fine write Bert! Damn fine write...I don't know what else to say! ~b"
Posted by blue on "Merman" by Gideon Lost
- "This..may sound slightly odd,but this actually reminded me of the cover of this childrens book I remember reading in primary school..I sincerely liked this poem and I loved the last two lines.."
Posted by Railway_Butterfly on "Paper Wishes" by Gideon Lost
- "~You, tortured by my Want And I, nailed to your Pride~ damn i love that line! this was twisted in a good way, welcome to DP ~kristy
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Posted by Sin on "My Love" by Gideon Lost
- "Nice ending. Honestly, I liked your other writes more, but this was still interesting and enjoyable to read. Maybe you'll find a nice friend to smear some butter on you."
Posted by stormtalk on "UnFly" by Gideon Lost
- "Very interesting... the ending wrapped it up skillfully, though the whole work was well-executed. And perhaps a little return to nature would do the poet some good, no? ;)"
Posted by stormtalk on "Paper Wishes" by Gideon Lost
- ""A necrotic umbilicus bloated and black" is fucking awesome. The dark, hellish melodrama of this piece makes me warm and fuzzy inside. Great write. Off to read more..."
Posted by stormtalk on "My Love" by Gideon Lost
- "..wow.. Wickedly descriptive.. How your soul must dwell in such a state.. Excellent write.. -Michael"
Posted by DarkWolf on "My Love" by Gideon Lost
- "Very nice indeed - The combination to a great write lay within this piece. The interpretation of a simple, yet constructive metaphorical backdrop always makes for a flem-tacular write. Excellent. [D&A]"
Posted by DoctorAsh on "UnFly" by Gideon Lost
- "Never stop writing... work of this calibre is hard to come by. Welcome to Dp... this mind is whole heartedly welcoming you..._Raven"
Posted by Raven on "Paper Wishes" by Gideon Lost
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