Comments by All Members
- "This was...beautiful.
I have to say, the last stanza was my favorite, which is to say something, because the entire poem is amazing. "
Posted by lenores_death on "inadequate" by caustic ink
- "you are more important than you will ever realize, than i will ever be able to convince you... you saved my life, and my faith more than a few times... for that my most beloved friend makes you treasured and your friendship of a value beyond that of anything within the universe... *much love always*"
Posted by NikesRain on "inadequate" by caustic ink
- "just had to add, hun. i think Eri would be astounded and smiling if she could read this...because i know the up side of this is all she ever hoped for you..."
Posted by NikesRain on "Twists in Fate" by caustic ink
- "the beginning still crushes me every time, yet the shift and movement through it is like walking through a tunnel, nearing the opposite side and finding the sky brightening... and i'm glad 'she' is the one regretting every vile thing she did...."
Posted by NikesRain on "Twists in Fate" by caustic ink
- "i can't help but smile because this shows just how beautifully intense you are even though you show a lighter sometimes reserved/quiet face to the world... i'm glad i nudge you to write especially when the results are like this...*hugs*"
Posted by NikesRain on "The Time between Passion" by caustic ink
- "fuckin hell - Ive just read the porno poem by Scarlett/Alanachy(?) and then this - im like really feeling horny; need to mess with me tickle stick - totally great write - holy bananas in me pants!"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "The Time between Passion" by caustic ink
- "ok last time and then i'll leave this alone.... i'm still sighing at this.... thank you for indulging my 'nudging' to get you to write more often"
Posted by NikesRain on "A Day Closer" by caustic ink
- "so full of tenderness, devotion and gentle sighs, touched with a bit of aching... it's beautifu... almost as much as your heart and spirit.. i hope your someday doesn't take very long to happen.... *hugs* love you "
Posted by NikesRain on "A Day Closer" by caustic ink
- "my gods hun this is so....*sigh*... i'm caught for the words to do this justice atm... i need to come back when i can breathe ... k*t *falls over* "
Posted by NikesRain on "A Day Closer" by caustic ink
- "a real test of patience.........a fingertip tease away...... but what do i know... ....a beautiful write"
Posted by elisa on "A Day Closer" by caustic ink
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