Comments by All Members
- ""This is the fury where nightmares collide" ...so powerful!!! this whole piece just works so well together! perfect tempo changing! outstanding work! ding~fav list! brian"
Posted by blue on "Where Nightmares Collide" by Stormcomin
- "first of all i must say that your have one hell of a title for this piece. and your content is amazing-your wording is untouchable. im rambling because im speechless. awesomely awesome write."
Posted by Twilight on "Where Nightmares Collide" by Stormcomin
- "My god . . this is incredible. I don't feel as though I merely "read" this . . I feel that it reached out from this page and insinuated itself into my mind. The rhyme and flow is gorgeous, and the subject matter is perfect . . a vivid masterpiece . . sha"
Posted by cre on "Where Nightmares Collide" by Stormcomin
- "OLd has stated precisely what I was thinking. This piece is exactly what I have been yearning for. You have quenched my thirst... and are now the newest of my favourites. =-MO-="
Posted by Unknown on "Where Nightmares Collide" by Stormcomin
- ""Mine are the nightmares of premature gallows, Of meadows and rainbows and willows in hell" im left within a deep grey fog of shadows, such sadness that i can relate too, with they way youve written it, i can see contemptment within you.. beautiful write."
Posted by MyBrokenMynd on "The Molested Whispers Of Shadows" by Stormcomin
- "i agree with everyone here, this was amazingly dark... the first stanza to the last was crafted and put together perfectly.. my favourite line "And pleas of forgiveness, forever denied
For torturous memories, one has to abide" "
Posted by MyBrokenMynd on "Where Nightmares Collide" by Stormcomin
- "i challenge all the rhyme haters on this site to read your work and not be affected. your structure is flawless. but enough about that...the language and imagery of this piece are sublime. this is an excellent write indeed."
Posted by stuart_pid on "Where Nightmares Collide" by Stormcomin
- "Good one...It's such a pleasant surprise when I click on a new poem and it's actually a good one! I love the rhyme scheme and the way you used the nightmare theme consistantly. Nicely done. ~Faerie~ =)"
Posted by Naked_Faerie on "Where Nightmares Collide" by Stormcomin
- "Compromise nothing to anyone, if there is a meaning that they do not understand, they should search for its meanings and maybe in searching they will come to learn something about life, a lesson... *smiles* I love this "
Posted by Solace on "The Molested Whispers Of Shadows" by Stormcomin
- "this is excellent; i can't help but hear music behind it. Cre's right - your rhyme scheme again is immaculate... the "From journey..." couplet outstanding. Great stuff."
Posted by purr_verse on "Hell's Concern" by Stormcomin
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