Comments by All Members
- "I really enjoy reading you. Again, great job on the rhyme scheme and what a story you tell. Well done."
Posted by cre on "Hell's Concern" by Stormcomin
- "you have very impressive skills. as eloquent and intricate as poetry should be with deep and well concieved content. i also really liked the rhyme scheme. rhyming kicks ass."
Posted by stuart_pid on "Bury My Heart With Demons" by Stormcomin
- ""i curse the air with vicious prayer of words that fall in vein." this line is amazing. the whole poem is awesome but that line sticks out to me. well done."
Posted by stuart_pid on "The Failing" by Stormcomin
- "....I can't help but continually visualize the pro wrestler "The Undertaker".
Which is cool. He's good."
Posted by Unknown on "The Taker" by Stormcomin
- "nice wording "heavenly geysers" and "pasty drool of perversionn" would be my favorites"
Posted by Unknown on "The Smell" by Stormcomin
- "Wow this was really cool. I love the the aabaab scheme. It just sounds awesome and flows so nice. Good write."
Posted by Butterfly on "Hell's Concern" by Stormcomin
- "Agree with BH: 4th stanza kicked poetry arse! And the rythm of it was just brilliant. Great write. ~S"
Posted by Storm on "Unforgiven" by Stormcomin
- "heheh...such is my musical taste that the first thing I thought of was the band Mayhem... But I knew the association aside from that. Either way, I liked it. >:)"
Posted by purr_verse on "Where Silence Is Forbidden" by Stormcomin
- "hell yes! The "I speak to death..." couplet is fan-fkkn-tastic. Reminded me of Martin Walkyier's lyrics (Sabbat/Skyclad), and that's high praise from me indeed. >:) Excellent."
Posted by purr_verse on "Being Of Shadow" by Stormcomin
- "ooh, impressive metre! I especially appreciated that you didn't get 'stuck' in one form of rhyme scheme, but nor did you chop and change needlessly, thus losing effect. Very well written piece; reads like a dark chant somehow. Welcome to DP. :) "
Posted by purr_verse on "Bury My Heart With Demons" by Stormcomin
- "Repressed memories. Forgotten horrors that constantly circulate deep in the back of your mind. What does it take to trigger these into conscious. What happens then?
Again, formatting issues. Anyone know how to correct this?"
Posted by Stormcomin on "The Smell" by Stormcomin
- "I reiterate...The subject matter while not appealing to me personally, has been well written and eloquently expressed...There is much talent here..."
Posted by Solace on "Bury My Heart With Demons" by Stormcomin
- "Oh my . . I am beyond impressed. This is utterly elevated, a transcendent art of some other form. The first stanza was an unflinching invitation . . and it did not cease to amaze me as I read in sincere admiration. Curiously haunting. ~ Rose."
Posted by Unknown on "Where Silence Is Forbidden" by Stormcomin
- "Beautiful,though I thought the flow was somewhat halted between stanzas it still read well....and....well what the hell do I know "
Posted by Unknown on "The Failing" by Stormcomin
- "wow, i just read all of this. it had me captured from the very beginning, this is quite the lovely but sad story. very intense and .. damn, i dunno the words. but i think that all rapists and abusers should meet the same fate. well done :D"
Posted by BeautifulCalamity on "Retribution Radio" by Stormcomin
- "You do something that most would view with disgust well...Very moving and well rendered...Welcome to DP"
Posted by Solace on "The Failing" by Stormcomin
- "Wow. This is an intricately spun masterpiece . . gorgeous rhyme and a chilling tale. I really enjoyed reading it. Well done."
Posted by cre on "Being Of Shadow" by Stormcomin
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