Comments by All Members
- "simplistic but very expressive/emotive - relatable, easy to read, comforting and haunting in the rhythm of it, i'm sure many relate!"
Posted by Unknown on "My broken heart" by rondant
- "That last line is the saddest. The narrator still holds on to the love she felt, even as she wills for it to be erased by time. This hits home for me because it reminds me of the terrible outcome that I once had a glimpse of.
Good work!"
Posted by Pride Ed on "Time" by rondant
- "This is so true. I find myself thinking this a lot. It flows very nicely, I like the rhythm. It speaks truth. "
Posted by Unknown on "Ode To Myself" by rondant
- "A very expressive poem, with incredible imagery. I'm so sorry you've had such a horrible experience with Christmas. I used to hate Christmas, too, but things have changed since I met my soul mate. "
Posted by Edgewalker on "Why I Hate Christmas" by rondant
- "Poignant and beautiful despite being impeccably sad! Sorry to read about your loss! Great to read someone with slightly different views on death though however! Beautiful Write!"
Posted by Spiral Downward on "MY DAD" by rondant
- "I mean no harm, however, it could have used a little more umph. though i did clearly understand you. It was well put."
Posted by darkleprechaun on "Boom" by rondant
- "Yikies.Your presentation of such and emotional time is so touching.I LOVE this."
Posted by Unknown on "My Song" by rondant
- "Death is very difficult to deal with and I respect you much for writing this. If you ever need to talk, im here. ~*~Tart~*~"
Posted by Kinkypoptart on "Dear Daddy" by rondant
- "good write... I really liked it and I can relate, but I must say, my life has gotten better, I guess... parts of it atleast...
Your poem is very well written, short n sweet, but oh so true... I like the way it flows aswell..."
Posted by Unknown on "Alone" by rondant
- "Yeah, we are all frightened of so many things. That's what makes us all human. Fear. This was very good. I love it Ronda."
Posted by Silent Assassin on "Frightened" by rondant
- "the repetition is very effective and it made me want to keep reading. i like this a lot."
Posted by Unknown on "Frightened" by rondant
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