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- "I really liked it, speaks to me. I can associate... Also, the flow and feel to it is amazing and every word works perfectly."
Posted by Unknown on "Self Portrait" by Derelict Dream
- "beauty is truly what uve just described....and yes we pity some who cannot find beauty by only looking at the skie in broad daylight....its as simple as that
:D....good woork (thumbs up)"
Posted by Unknown on "Of Beauty and Sight" by Derelict Dream
- "Hmmmm. From self pity, to emergence, to acceptance. But then on to wanting to jump right back in. To repeat the same mistakes? Or maybe get it right this time? Cool write. That second little haiku piece was my favorite. Nice work."
Posted by Alanarchy on "Melting Snow" by Derelict Dream
- "i liked the rhythm, but other than that couldn't get into it much. it reminded me of myself for some reason."
Posted by MESUN on "Anticipation" by Derelict Dream
- "wow...i dun have the words to describe how captivating this was. i liked it =] it had perfect rhythm all the way through. i liked the turmoil of emotions in the 5th and 6th stanza cos i'm sure i've been there too ;)"
Posted by ShardsofSilence on "Tragedy denied." by Derelict Dream
- "I forgot to mention that the names were changed to protect the innocent, and to complete the rhyming scheme...
This was a painful lesson to learn, and I am glad I learned it early in life... (Before age 16)"
Posted by Derelict Dream on "Cheating" by Derelict Dream
- "This is so sincere, yet something still seems very unearthly about it . .perhaps it is the way in which you have wrote . . "I'm sure that there are others who have a Derelict Dream." ~ alluring, strangely captivating . . the almost unbearable honesty is f"
Posted by Unknown on "Self Portrait" by Derelict Dream
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