Comments by All Members
- "In my opinion, I think this poem was written just how it was supposed to be written. I feel a very similar way but let me just say that Willow is right, you are not alone. We might all be strangers but we are also a family here on DP because we can relate to one another and we are not judgmental. Sometimes talking to a stranger is better than talking to a person you know, so if you ever need someone to talk to or vent to, feel free to message me. - 10:43"
Posted by 10 Forty Three on "Empty Plate" by Queazenart
- "Thanks for taking so much time to write such a formulated response. I guess I do write "within myself", but that's because I subscribe to the belief that writing should be clear and precise. That belief might make me a little bit of a simple poet, but I enjoy it and that's what matters. I have so many poems that I'm nurturing into fully realized pieces so maybe one of them will be a bit more eccentric, a la everything you write :^) Again, thanks for the comment. The only thing I didn't like was the life advice at the start XD"
Posted by Queazenart on "Empty Plate" by Queazenart
- "This was actually first written over a week ago. Saturday was unrelated. Thanks for the kind words, though :)"
Posted by Queazenart on "Empty Plate" by Queazenart
- "Damnit! Q I knew something was off Saturday night! Mom instincts hon. Even in typed conversations sadness can be heard if read correctly. You have my real email if need be. Honey you are not alone. I will not tell you it will go away. I will just listen/read. This is wonderfully expressed but truly sadddens me."
Posted by Willow Wept on "Empty Plate" by Queazenart
- "I think what you're going through -at least in this poem- is very normal and it will pass .. things will look differently soon enough. You know that I'm sure. Best to talk it through with a good friend if you can -don't worry about imposing I'm sure you'd be there for them. With regard to the poem I think you write succinctly but I get the impression you write within yourself by which i mean I think you can write more artistically, even if that might mean bordering on the pretentious- I personally (and it's always a matter of taste) like to see something different in the wording when I read a poem something which really affects.. I think you have more of that in you. Hope that's OK to say, it's with the best intention. I think you're writes are good in conveying your message but I also think there's potentially a lot more to come from you poetically speaking.. And gosh that's a long comment. Write on Queaze."
Posted by out there on "Empty Plate" by Queazenart
- "This has a rather nice flow and solid imagery. I wonder though other than certain holier than thou people who would really consider themselves a decent being."
Posted by nightshade on "No Decent Human Being" by Queazenart
- "Well, thanks for the interesting insight, dwells. Personally, I write to make sense of the madness going on in my life and my head... So, yeah, a little different XD."
Posted by Queazenart on "Letter Letting" by Queazenart
- "We write because...
Personally I think it might be a subconscious appeal to a collective consciousness (now I sound like I'm from California). OR, maybe a small attempt at a modest immortality. Nevertheless, enjoyed sharing your thoughts, even if were not on the same wavelength Queaz. Cheers! - Dan"
Posted by dwells on "Letter Letting" by Queazenart
- "I cannot describe how intensely I read this. It is remarkable, the feelings I share with this piece. The muse I chase to chase down never settles in time to capture the line, sentence, word, thought, fear, dream, anger.... so much so I may die one day from it. Wonderfully written. It be my poets lament. 10"
Posted by tmanzano on "Letter Letting" by Queazenart
- "This was great. Reminded me of all the times i would write "to" someone, even put so much time into, though my eyes were the only that saw it. Manic feeling, well done."
Posted by Unknown on "Letter Letting" by Queazenart
- "Worthlessness to self... It's terrible, but manageable. Worthlessness to another soul... Kill me now! ...I, once upon a time, struggles with the mixed emotions about my self-worth and it had a horrid outcome. Relatable piece. -Write on"
Posted by soul_versing on "No Decent Human Being" by Queazenart
- "Wow. The flow in this piece is superb. The wording is well thought out and the whole premise of this write is something that I'm sure many can relate to. Write on."
Posted by Noel Haiasi on "No Decent Human Being" by Queazenart
