Comments by All Members
- "You look like John Q. Citizen Mo; that's a good thing. But I'm lots older than you by eons amigo!
I'd thought from the title that there might be a clue here to "Stephanie Sideways" - a personal fav from a few years ago here at DP. Cheers and write on! - Dan "
Posted by dwells on "sideways mo" by molock
- "Thanks man, i was listening to some (hed pe ) " killing time " it inspired me to write this. I don't know if you've heard of them but they're kinda like insane clown posse meets rage against the machine, they're great lyric writer's. This one is kinda choppy so i might re-wright it at some point. Talk to ya later bro, peace"
Posted by molock on "6 strange days" by molock
- "This is about a 6 day crystal meth binge, where the person feels as if they've lost there soul along the way.
The broken glass is a reference to using a broken light bulb to smoke meth. Thanks as always your comments and insight are always welcome. Cheers sis .....mo"
Posted by molock on "6 strange days" by molock
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I'm curious: What happened to the 7th day? Or was the 7th day detailing the 6 days thus the question answered for the 7th day missing? ... Confusing, hmm, I know ... which is the way I feel about this piece ... Mo, you don't know this, but man do I love poems that scramble my brain! ... ;) ... Sis
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Posted by Devil lyn on "6 strange days" by molock
- "It's fun to watch when a player is in the zone. Whether you're a a Qb or shooting guard or a shortstop. It's magic and as fans we look on in awe. Same is true of an artist. Mo is in a zone. Enjoy. "
Posted by Damien on "6 strange days" by molock
- "thanks Devlin, I missed ya last week. you're one of my favorite new writers. hope everything is well with you, can't wait to read your next masterpiece. later sis, ..mo"
Posted by molock on "i just rocked my baby to sleep" by molock
- "thanks as always man, you also are branching out. writing short stories in my opinion is much harder than poetry or lyrics 'cause of the detail that's required. my guitar hangs vertically on the wall in my room I glued a Robert plant symbol patch on the wall to hold my picks, I couldn't figure out how to rotate the image so I posted it as is. love ya man, peace ..mo"
Posted by molock on "i just rocked my baby to sleep" by molock
- " I've always loved music but never tried to play guitar. then I had a stroke a year ago in October so I decided to get a guitar for hand eye rehabilitation. so far I've learned 5 chords and I can play along with some songs in choppy spirts. light years away from where I started and light years away from where I want to be. good luck with your axe brother, talk to ya later bro, ...mo"
Posted by molock on "i just rocked my baby to sleep" by molock
- "It seems like everyone here is branching out a little. Expanding their artistic ability and I enjoy the many different forms I see. I'm the last person you will see at an art exhibit that's why I like this site. I get to see art at its best without the stuffy environment. Nice work Mo"
Posted by Damien on "i just rocked my baby to sleep" by molock
- "thanks Damien, coming from you it's very humbling and I mean that. I just can't stop thinking about " the sound of death " I honestly believe if you went further in to the character and the story behind the people in the truck and the man that shot the main character at the end, it would be a great movie script ....blockbuster!! we're all good here, hope it's the same there. you guys be good. peace brother"
Posted by molock on "sacred ground" by molock
- "this reminded me of something Hank Williams III would do.. not that he would but i can hear the finger picking guitar and your lyrics ringing out.. very nice"
Posted by Unknown on "sacred ground" by molock
- "Ladies and gentlemen of DP, Mo is back and in top form. Im sure everyone who writes feels at some point they have hit a wall. But since you've been back you have delivered one gem after another. As I said before DP is just not the same without you. There something very special about your work. My best to you and your gal. Later brother"
Posted by Damien on "sacred ground" by molock
- "thanks for the very kind words, humbling to say the least. looking forward to reading more of your work this weekend.
later sister"
Posted by molock on "my co-dependent" by molock
- "thank you, I know how hard it is, keep fighting and stay strong. welcome to dp, I look forward to reading some of your work as well. later ....mo"
Posted by molock on "my co-dependent" by molock
- "thanks for reading and commenting, this is my way of describing depression. you're right there's a lot of compromise required. cheers 10 Forty three, i'll be checkin' out your page soon. later! ...mo"
Posted by molock on "my co-dependent" by molock
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As ``Misery loves Company``, misery also loves poetry ... Wow, Mo, this left me rather speechless but in a good way;)
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Posted by Devil lyn on "my co-dependent" by molock
- "I am new here I thought I would leave a comment. I have suffered depression many times through my life, I can truly relate to this piece. I also am with a man who suffers from depression and it is one of the hardest illness I've had to deal with. I really love the formatting of your work too. You did a great job.
Thank you for sharing. "
Posted by Unknown on "my co-dependent" by molock
- "The title and the poem itself are absolutely clever and brilliant. The war between acceptance and tolerance continues... Well done. - 10:43"
Posted by 10 Forty Three on "my co-dependent" by molock
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