Comments by All Members
- "this may be my favorite piece by you thus far--many excellent lines--my favorite stanza is the second one "
Posted by Northstar on "Nothing More" by lordshadow
- "interesting piece--I really like the lines "its strange/how blue can be both so cold and so hot" and the way you describe it is very original"
Posted by Northstar on "Blue" by lordshadow
- "excellent metre!! hooray! :) welcome to dp - this was a smooth and impressive read...my favourite part is the first half of the second stanza. fine write!"
Posted by purr_verse on "Nothing More" by lordshadow
