Comments by All Members
- "very original and well writen. i love the symbolism of the colors from the fire. ive never read anything quite like this, im going to fave it."
Posted by stuart_pid on "Blue" by lordshadow
- "powerful brutaltruth; the last four lines are exceptionally good. your metre and structure never fails to impress; excellent write."
Posted by purr_verse on "Kill or Be Killed" by lordshadow
- "the bombardment of rhymes caused my mind to do somersaults and the words fluidly roll off the tounge. i love the way you constantly change rhythm in this peice. excelent work my friend."
Posted by stuart_pid on "The Allegedly Abused" by lordshadow
- "i know this-seen it wide eyes wide open. cant deny that like anything else. summers heat and winters frost...both can be delivered from the same intentions. wow...love it."
Posted by Twilight on "Blue" by lordshadow
- "and another example from you of excellent metre and a real natural feel for cadence. :) the second-last stanza is my favourite here; strong message in this one too. fine write!"
Posted by purr_verse on "Hate" by lordshadow
- "lovin it man im lovin it yet again you over shadow me great write ~Ends"
Posted by Unknown on "Hate" by lordshadow
- "If I am understanding this correctly someone has been reading to much poetry on this website. but I must agree with you I'm pretty shure allmost everyone on this site is an intellectual sadomasochist "
Posted by Unknown on "Hate" by lordshadow
- "Oh my god... ouch.. I can relate to this to a terrible degree. amazing work here. I LOVE the ending. people like that just aren't worth the energy of anyone's emotion. I'd almost say they're not even worth hating... Incredible work.. amazingly powerful."
Posted by Lynaes on "Love at First Sight (not this time asshole)" by lordshadow
- "holy crap i am stunned and amazed and it makes me realize how much i suck in comparison to the people on this website wow absolutley amazing ~Ends"
Posted by Unknown on "Nothing More" by lordshadow
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