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"A Masterpiece!! "
Posted by mysticventures on "Metaphors Spin Easily (from the mouths of Dark Poets)" by lordshadow

"Whoa. The flow, the rhythm, the words... this is stunning. And I'd have never found it if not for the Random button. "
Posted by Unknown on "Between Us Lays a Minefield" by lordshadow

"what a marvellously constructed and clever, insightful, well-observed and thought-provoking write. outstanding, outstanding. :)"
Posted by purr_verse on "Metaphors Spin Easily (from the mouths of Dark Poets)" by lordshadow

"Epic meanings make for epic poetry...This was well said and all in all very well done..."
Posted by Solace on "Metaphors Spin Easily (from the mouths of Dark Poets)" by lordshadow

"scenes of violence... "brand new" you...eyelids taped to your forehead...That's it. You're a favourite now... *grins* welcome to the list..._Raven"
Posted by Raven on "A Brand New You (bondage and brainwash)" by lordshadow

"I'm hooked now, I'm afraid... "You can't choose all of the above.." Thank me not for the comments... this is incredible work.._Raven"
Posted by Raven on "If" by lordshadow

"Holy shit. (I'm not normally one to say something as such, but that is the first thing that came to my mind) I love the lay-out, the rhyme scheme... the spinning metaphor idea is superb, and superbly executed. Kudos..._Raven"
Posted by Raven on "Metaphors Spin Easily (from the mouths of Dark Poets)" by lordshadow

"very clever, and excellently constructed, write. great use of metaphor/simile; love the conclusion too... Great work!"
Posted by purr_verse on "If" by lordshadow

"Woohoo this kicked ass. Glad to see you writing again! "
Posted by Dayer on "A Brand New You (bondage and brainwash)" by lordshadow

"This rocked! "but what if life is but a dream? would you take that life by waking up? " wow hun...just WOW"
Posted by Dayer on "If" by lordshadow

"Interesting thought process...written with great rhythm and a wonderful choice of words...If life was nothing but pain, would you choose to do it again? Nice work..."
Posted by DarkDruidess on "If" by lordshadow

"..like the way this moved, the contemplations it causes. how true we all drift along, it's the learning to stop kicking and screaming that gets us. Nicely done"
Posted by NikesRain on "If" by lordshadow

"that was wonderful. i was especially caught on "would you choose sorrow, pain, or love? you can't choose 'all of the above'" and i have no idea what i would do... but this was a wonderful peice!"
Posted by Unknown on "If" by lordshadow

"i liked the flow of this (no pun intended) "
Posted by Angst Queen on "If" by lordshadow

"merrily, merrily people go down the waterfall too :) excellent work.. loved the flow! (pardon the crude comment)"
Posted by Zhee on "If" by lordshadow

"this was great. kinda fucked up but great"
Posted by _untouchable_ on "If" by lordshadow

"very interested piece. i could actually feel something prying behind my ear....gives me chills. well done."
Posted by Twilight on "A Brand New You (bondage and brainwash)" by lordshadow

"ahhhhh a little bit of the ultraviolence perhaps.....nicely done"
Posted by Unknown on "A Brand New You (bondage and brainwash)" by lordshadow

"somehow this all rang with familiarity to me - imagine that :) - awsome write and glad to read you again!!!"
Posted by mysticventures on "A Brand New You (bondage and brainwash)" by lordshadow

"excellent! damn fine to see you back, and this is a fantastic write - the rhythmshifts are great and really well done; love the ominous feeling of the ending too. great stuff. :)"
Posted by purr_verse on "A Brand New You (bondage and brainwash)" by lordshadow

"and i thought i was abducted by aliens. no really this is really nice work, raw and uncut, readable at the same time"
Posted by FallenFaith on "A Brand New You (bondage and brainwash)" by lordshadow

"Also... the title caught my attention and I am so glad you didn't let me down with this. Some people get great titles and there work just ruins it all, but obviously not in your case. Amazing insight! Bethany"
Posted by Soulseeker on "A Brand New You (bondage and brainwash)" by lordshadow

"WOW... This is great. It is so clear what is going on but so hidden as well. It holds a great concept and I really can relate to this thought of society but maybe not quite so delicately. "
Posted by Soulseeker on "A Brand New You (bondage and brainwash)" by lordshadow

"...and I will be reading yours as well. thank you."
Posted by lordshadow on "A Brand New You (bondage and brainwash)" by lordshadow

"glad to be back. but you're too nice. thanks for the words."
Posted by lordshadow on "A Brand New You (bondage and brainwash)" by lordshadow

"the title is awesome... and you are so right!"
Posted by Zhee on "A Brand New You (bondage and brainwash)" by lordshadow

"this was simply profound..i am so glad you're back!:)"
Posted by Zhee on "A Brand New You (bondage and brainwash)" by lordshadow

"Bhairav*"
Posted by Angst Queen on "A Brand New You (bondage and brainwash)" by lordshadow

"::eyes widen:: i'm with Bhairave here, damn..."
Posted by Angst Queen on "A Brand New You (bondage and brainwash)" by lordshadow

"wowwwwww...in-friggin-credible write....glad i found your warks..and will be reading more"
Posted by Unknown on "A Brand New You (bondage and brainwash)" by lordshadow

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