Comments by All Members
- "You have yet to let me down with your words, my friend... This hit hard and deep...*favs* I love this whole piece._Raven"
Posted by Raven on "Blue" by lordshadow
- "this leaves me softly sad, and reflective, it's wonderful.... you've laden it with symbolism and metaphors, but in such a gentle way, just telling it like it seems to be.... beautiful."
Posted by Lotophagi on "Blue" by lordshadow
- "Whoa... I read this twice, and still, words fail me... I love it"
Posted by Ideas on "Hate" by lordshadow
- "This was.. wow. I love your angle on things. You have such a great grasp on observing and then putting things to words. You write differently than most. I adore it."
Posted by Unknown on "Hate" by lordshadow
- ""when an hour won't suffice and eternity's expired you required more than you could need" Oh boy, this one hit me hard. Each line pulled me further in, and sank my heart a bit deeper. "
Posted by Unknown on "Welcome to 'It's Too Late'" by lordshadow
- ""your words are wounds I wear with pride in every stitch and suture" Yeah, I quoted it - just like the others below. I just loved that line. Lovely."
Posted by Unknown on "Infection" by lordshadow
- "in deed it does... however if I told you, that would defeat the mystery and mystery makes for good poetry :-) thank you for your comments."
Posted by lordshadow on "Infection" by lordshadow
- "*in awe*.. this was a magnificent write! profound depth and feeling.. wonderful flow and structure..brilliant work!!!"
Posted by Zhee on "Infection" by lordshadow
- "dig the rhyme scheme as allways...this poem seems to have a personal meaning to you that try as I might I can not decipher"
Posted by Unknown on "Infection" by lordshadow
- "I must echo Solace on this..."Your words are wounds I wear with pride..." It was like you slammed a spear into my heart...incredible feeling in this piece..."
Posted by DarkDruidess on "Infection" by lordshadow
- ""Your words are wounds I wear with pride..." I'm gonna remember that line, this was extremely well done indeed..."
Posted by Solace on "Infection" by lordshadow
- "the penultimate stanza is damn outstanding; could be used as an instructional device for how to create effective rhyme, metre, cadence & format without sacrificing meaning. excellent!"
Posted by purr_verse on "Infection" by lordshadow
- "Oh, niice... I absolutely love your rhyming ability (fictitious-surreptitious)... incredible. I'm going to go read this again... _Raven
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Posted by Raven on "Infection" by lordshadow
- "...So, all in all, I think what I'm trying to say, is that this is a fantastic piece of work; You, my friend, are an amazing poet; and I am in awe of this piece. Kudos. _Raven"
Posted by Raven on "Welcome to 'It's Too Late'" by lordshadow
- "Next, (and I realize this is becoming an essay... shoot me:) is while you use 'foul' words from time to time, your story is not completely dependent on them. That, and the contrast, with your higher wordage, just makes them that much more of a jolt... "
Posted by Raven on "Welcome to 'It's Too Late'" by lordshadow
- "...subliminally hooked to your words. Thirdly, you have this way with expressing things...The 'silver' first two lines, right through to the 'disease of why?' ... all of this has me quite captivated"
Posted by Raven on "Welcome to 'It's Too Late'" by lordshadow
- "This whole piece is amazing! Firstly, you have a refreshing grasp on vocabulary, and this shines through in everything. Second, your rhyme scheme, whether intended or not, is just far enough away that it cannot be predicted, and keeps the reader sublimina"
Posted by Raven on "Welcome to 'It's Too Late'" by lordshadow
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