Comments by All Members
- "the concluding stanza is marvellous - simple, powerful, challenging and...well, all the good stuff. >:) Always a great thing to see a post from you!"
Posted by purr_verse on "A Storm Just for Me" by lordshadow
- "The first lines stabbed...and the last lines quickly gutted me. "Does it take sandbags...something is definately not right" hit home the hardest... Very powerful write..._Raven"
Posted by Raven on "A Storm Just for Me" by lordshadow
- "Extremely impressive . . a wonderful write . . the depth is just amazing . . the poem as a whole is beguiling. Thank you for sharing ~ Rose"
Posted by Unknown on "Infection" by lordshadow
- "I read this again and I must not have read it good the first time cuz it is absolutely awesome. I love the rhyme in it, how well it flows. Your use of vocabulary in this also is wonderful. Well done, indeed"
Posted by Savannah on "Infection" by lordshadow
- "Should have title this *A girl called Blue* and made it into a sad jazz/blues song...that woulda kicked ass almost as much as the poem did...just freaking awesome...wish i was a jazz musician so I could make this into a song..."
Posted by Solace on "Blue" by lordshadow
- "You posted this comment a long time ago and it just dawned on me... with all the poetry on this site, you call THIS fucked up? Read more my friend, this is G-rated shit comparatively speaking."
Posted by lordshadow on "If" by lordshadow
- "just wow, you've managed to pull off one of the trickiest rhyming schemes (in my opinion) with superb grace.... This has to be one of the first successful serious pieces of poetry I've seen to achieve that.... excellent, excellent write."
Posted by Lotophagi on "Infection" by lordshadow
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