Comments by All Members
- "excellent for an old piece. i'm not one that usually digs rhyme, but this held together and no stanza was what i'd call bad and some were what i'd call quite good"
Posted by Jonas on "The Pain That Never Dies..." by Zhee
- "who is the who in me...if could figure that out.. i wouldnt need to write!!!"
Posted by Zhee on "~INDENTURED~" by Zhee
- "whose thoughts??i think at at the time i wrote this everyone wanted me to conform...to what is expected of you and the thought process "those who are older and wiser" have enslaved themselves to.. "
Posted by Zhee on "~INDENTURED~" by Zhee
- "One question: Who's thoughts?
Another: Who is the WHO in you?
~Shane~"
Posted by Unknown on "~INDENTURED~" by Zhee
- "meh, this felt like it was slamming ME , alas i am a curator of the psychadellic substances. very very well done though, even such as I can see the truth in this. *applauds*"
Posted by Unknown on "TOXIC!!!!" by Zhee
- "wow, very intense. its sad that poeple do this to themselves and then expect sympathy. very nice write."
Posted by stuart_pid on "TOXIC!!!!" by Zhee
- "well the title says it all..toxic; very cool..i need to learn bigger words now, and rite something good...~~~drunk trag guy..later"
Posted by Unknown on "TOXIC!!!!" by Zhee
- "but as a psychologist, (and poet) you yourself have learned to see so much more, because you just have to. Thanks again, Zhee! ~Shane~"
Posted by Unknown on "So..You Killed Yourself..." by Zhee
- "My grave marker should perhaps read 'RUST IN PIECES', as a reference to my disability & use of a wheelchair. That's all that some people see..."
Posted by Unknown on "So..You Killed Yourself..." by Zhee
- "Damn Zhee! This was, may I say, wicked? With this poem, your use of an everyday object makes this anthropomorphic. I wonder now, did you ever believe that your guitar was ever (ahem) more alive than you already are? :) ~Shane~"
Posted by Unknown on "Carnage Of The Strings" by Zhee
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