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"wonderful use of words to paint such vivid pictures. outstanding work here"
Posted by NikesRain on "Navigating The Dark Waters Of The Unconscious" by Zhee

"i dont know how you do it zhee, another perfect write. "
Posted by stuart_pid on "Vermilion Carpet, Crimson Shroud" by Zhee

"the sorrow felt in this is choking.. you've done a highly creditable job, expressing this tragedy.. amazing. "
Posted by Lynaes on "Vermilion Carpet, Crimson Shroud" by Zhee

""~bury with broken hands â€“ what made you feel alive~" that tore me to shreds.. it's all too easy to relate to in so many ways.. I agree with everything purr said.. "
Posted by Lynaes on "Vermilion Carpet, Crimson Shroud" by Zhee

""madness had found its prey" i love your work the way you write is utterly amazing"
Posted by Angst Queen on "Navigating The Dark Waters Of The Unconscious" by Zhee

"your work is impressive and makes me think i should hide in a dark hole for my lack of talent heh. i really love this, espeacially the last line"
Posted by Angst Queen on "Morphed Dreams In The Heart Of Hallucinationâ€¦." by Zhee

"i feel so bad for the parents. you expressed this wonderfully"
Posted by Angst Queen on "Vermilion Carpet, Crimson Shroud" by Zhee

"i love the last line. and the title... boy do i know nights like that... good job "
Posted by Unknown on "Morphed Dreams In The Heart Of Hallucinationâ€¦." by Zhee

"wow"
Posted by lordshadow on "Vermilion Carpet, Crimson Shroud" by Zhee

"what quiet power in this write... dignified and horrific; as has been said, crushing... beautifully expressed, and such sorrow leaving me choked."
Posted by purr_verse on "Vermilion Carpet, Crimson Shroud" by Zhee

"The last verse, particularly "Now the rampant nightmares Just stab the open eyes" such a perfect description, damn. this just kicked my ass.. great work here. "
Posted by Lynaes on "Morphed Dreams In The Heart Of Hallucinationâ€¦." by Zhee

"weird-ishly creepy, but enjoyable read."
Posted by Unknown on "PUTTING UP WITH SHIT...LITERALLY!!!" by Zhee

"VERY nicely wrote...seems we can find truth when we let ourselves think the least...keep using your intuition ~UC~"
Posted by Unknown on "Fractured Faith" by Zhee

"heart wrenching and crushing..beautiful and sad."
Posted by Unknown on "Vermilion Carpet, Crimson Shroud" by Zhee

"nicely written."
Posted by OLd SouL on "Vermilion Carpet, Crimson Shroud" by Zhee

"the meaning behind it is sad, deadened... the poem is still beautiful, lovely words, and the morbid imagery.. put so much into my heart.. "
Posted by BeautifulCalamity on "Vermilion Carpet, Crimson Shroud" by Zhee

"Oh god, Zhee. This is crushing. It must be terrible to watch people go through that...or to go through that at all...beautiful."
Posted by Unknown on "Vermilion Carpet, Crimson Shroud" by Zhee

"i agree with twi, the last line was crushing...what a terrible situation...how could you not be affected by it...the work is beautiful even though it holds great pain..."
Posted by girlafraid on "Vermilion Carpet, Crimson Shroud" by Zhee

""bury with broken hands â€“ what made you feel alive" this whole thing was heartbreaking...my chest is shattered. and the shards are ripping my insides to shreds."
Posted by Twilight on "Vermilion Carpet, Crimson Shroud" by Zhee

"i absolutely agree.. my patients should never ever see this and those who do should never be my patients ;)"
Posted by Zhee on "Morphed Dreams In The Heart Of Hallucinationâ€¦." by Zhee

"amazing, Zhee. im left almost speechless.. as usual, fabulous work"
Posted by Unknown on "Morphed Dreams In The Heart Of Hallucinationâ€¦." by Zhee

"so.. just marvelous. I cant help but love reading your works. you are a true artist with words."
Posted by torn_beauty on "Morphed Dreams In The Heart Of Hallucinationâ€¦." by Zhee

"Zhee,you never cease to amaze me...marvelous simply marvelous ~kristy"
Posted by Sin on "Morphed Dreams In The Heart Of Hallucinationâ€¦." by Zhee

"I have come to the conclusion that you should never let any of your patients read your poetry they'd probably go more crazy...I did enjoy the poem though"
Posted by Unknown on "Morphed Dreams In The Heart Of Hallucinationâ€¦." by Zhee

"ooooooo i love it...love that is....::scuttles off to add to faves::"
Posted by Angst Queen on "Morphed Dreams In The Heart Of Hallucinationâ€¦." by Zhee

"3rd stanza was killer,cool write"
Posted by Anth on "Morphed Dreams In The Heart Of Hallucinationâ€¦." by Zhee

"how beautiful words become, when you begin to look deeper into your mind...love this write and will most likely read more *smiles*"
Posted by Unknown on "Navigating The Dark Waters Of The Unconscious" by Zhee

"ill see you upon the waters of unconciousness...you write from experience...shweetness...-]darkness[-"
Posted by whisperer on "Navigating The Dark Waters Of The Unconscious" by Zhee

""Death painted upon its sword" i wish i thought of that, good choice of words "
Posted by Bella Butchery on "Navigating The Dark Waters Of The Unconscious" by Zhee

"excellent! fab vocab, fab cadence, fab imagery...this was all-around great and subsuming and just damn fine. :)"
Posted by purr_verse on "Navigating The Dark Waters Of The Unconscious" by Zhee

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