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- "I wonder whether it's harder for a person to experience this, or whether it was even harder for you to write it. Perhaps both. Many thanks for all your work you do, both w/your words on paper & the patients you see every day. *faves* ~Shane~"
Posted by Unknown on "*~The Phoenix That Never Arose From Its Ashes~*" by Zhee
- ""While you rest in pieces..." I must say that was the best last line I've ever read. Great poem, just simply great. ~s"
Posted by Storm on "So..You Killed Yourself..." by Zhee
- ""Your pristine tears- Silently rain on scorched flesh, Waiting .... For the phoenix to arise from the ashes…" ~ you are amazing Zhee . . to have such insight in someone elses emotions evoked from their unbearable experiences. This write is profound . . "
Posted by Unknown on "*~The Phoenix That Never Arose From Its Ashes~*" by Zhee
- ""for the vacuous words rending my heart, enshrouded in gossamer veils of empathic pretension..."..i wanted to quote a line that sincerely embraced me but i have realised that i could not forsake any of them. The last line left me breathless. I love "
Posted by Unknown on "*~Soulless Gratitude~*" by Zhee
- "every one of your works amazes me and inspires, i am left shaken in the aftermath of your brilliance ~kristy"
Posted by Sin on "*~Soulless Gratitude~*" by Zhee
- "Raw emotion with blood spewing out of my monitor. I lick it to taste the pain I see. This mad me sad, but in a sadist kinda way. It's a good way though. I love this poem. PS-I failed at being "artsy-fartsy" with this comment. But it deserved a try."
Posted by Zahgurim on "The Great Defeat...." by Zhee
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