Comments by All Members
- "yeah i know burn mf burn has been used such as alot of lines i've heard in many songs have been repeated. i just really liked that line i had to use it i hope i just haven't over done using that line or anything but thanks for the compliment."
Posted by Dark Goth on "Burn Your House Down" by Dark Goth
- "This has a nice flow to it, a good beat. Though the phrase "burn mother fucker burn" has been used quite a bit in the past, it was used well here, definitely fit in. Really had to read in between the repeated stanzas to find a good meaning, however. Good, none the less."
Posted by wilted on "Burn Your House Down" by Dark Goth
- "Thanks man. I wrote this poem dedicate it to my ex. The inspiration I got was when I found out she slept with my used to be best friend. I don't like him anymore. I wish they would both go away for a long time."
Posted by Dark Goth on "Ever Be" by Dark Goth
- "Speechless, that was incredible, love the way it rhymed. damn you have talent
Envy your way with words
~Crow"
Posted by Dark Wing on "Ever Be" by Dark Goth
- "hey silent you could've put all that into one comment. they do make enough room for all that to fit. just in case you didn't know. just a helpful tip. and thanks for the feedback and yeah it basically sets the stage to lure someone into a trap."
Posted by Dark Goth on "Killing You Was The Solution To My Misery" by Dark Goth
- "ok so whoever else is reading this. fuck what prophet says there wasn't much thought in this one just gettng anger out which doesn't require much effort. also the next one i'm writing I'm spending lots more time on. It'll be a masterpiece."
Posted by Dark Goth on "Kill Shadow" by Dark Goth
- "Like a burning flame to always be true - Flames are always true...and they speak directly to the soul....I would like permission to print this one as well if you don't mind."
Posted by Unknown on "Passionate Love" by Dark Goth
- "i can smell your anger. who says u need to have a clever rhyme or quip to call it a poem? pshh..i don't. you got your message out loud and clear. ty for sharing. the only thing.. i think you should've ended it with 'fuck you shadow'.that statement is powerful enough if u ask me."
Posted by Syringe on "Kill Shadow" by Dark Goth
- "if you love like you are hating in this one...there is one LUCKY Lady in this pitiful universe...I felt the anger!!"
Posted by Unknown on "Kill Shadow" by Dark Goth
- "I enjoyed this piece...the only thing that threw me was the "You labeled me... Ill label you"...I think that was in a Metallica song...idk...I liked this though."
Posted by Narcissa on "Worry In The House Of Theives" by Dark Goth
- "So I noticed after a bad situation I was in that my friends that left me like to steal. Can't believe my crowd of friends consisted mostly of theives. Well I'm gonna find a new group of friends and that's what influenced this poem."
Posted by Dark Goth on "Worry In The House Of Theives" by Dark Goth
- "That be witch craft brother, try a good ol fashion night on the town with mates, your next write of opposite spectrum, may just be sitting in a corner booth waiting for there dark goth to come along. "
Posted by Unknown on "Fountain Of Light" by Dark Goth
- "Sometimes in order to get over a bad relationship you have to find a spell that helps you get over it. This is what I originally came up with for a spell to help me get over my bad relationship. Hopefully this will help out someone else that's looking to get over a bad relationship."
Posted by Dark Goth on "Fountain Of Light" by Dark Goth
- "Its sorta sketchy and hard to fallow....Sorrow is a beautifully elegent language, but its not easy to master, so no worries."
Posted by Lydia Jade on "Suicide Note 3" by Dark Goth
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