Comments by All Members
- "I actually liked it a lot. It was short, and contained several seemingly random things, but then came the words "mix bag a nothing" and I just loved it."
Posted by Unknown on "Scattershot" by megaprime81
- "In order to be truly in love, we have to be crazy. Then once the heart is filled, we're completely insane. I like this shade of your talent. Excellent. Later -"
Posted by Sean Mc Shane on "Love Ballad" by megaprime81
- "Alas, I've discovered that i unwittingly got the part about "Your love drove me crazy, baby" from Bon Jovi's "This Ain't a Love Song", so I have to do a bit of a re-write."
Posted by megaprime81 on "Love Ballad" by megaprime81
- "Wicked ballad with just the most perfect mood! Desperate, and slightly obsessive. Just a wonderful piece! =)"
Posted by Unknown on "Love Ballad" by megaprime81
- "If I could, I would take away your pain. I know how it feels - maybe not in the same way that you do, but in a very very similar way. However, you've made it this far and I know you can make it further. I hope you will find light and the beginning glimmer of joy in the not-so-distant future. God knows you deserve it. "
Posted by SilentHeart on "I Deserve It" by megaprime81
- "This sounds exactly the way I feel. Your words - they describe myself perfectly. Be strong, keep going. It's tough, and it gets tougher. The good news is, you can get tougher as well. And I believe that you will. "
Posted by SilentHeart on "Battling Depression" by megaprime81
- "such longing....i've managed to steer clear of obsession as it hurts like this. it makes for absolutely wrenching poetry like this. I wish you well, swell poetry you have. c:"
Posted by Unknown on "Dust" by megaprime81
- "Sharply written and it is one of your best. You reach out into far distances with this. *strife* Nice one :)"
Posted by blue angel on "Dust" by megaprime81
- "It's in Spanish. This is the full poem, translated:
"I'm a Loser"
I'm a loser
I'm very crazy
I'm very ugly
How are you?
Very bad, and you?
I'm a loser
I'm very stupid
I'm very crazy
I'm very ugly
Ever ride with the dead?
Yes."
Posted by megaprime81 on "Soy Un Perdidor" by megaprime81
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