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- "There are so many great lines in this one, but I especially liked "She shaved her head
Into neo-punk hawk dreads
that seem to bloom
Like flowers and vines
To cover her wounds" - that presents such a great visual! I also like the notion...so often true, but seldom believed...that "she doesn't want to be complete". You have such a fantastic style...can you please post some new stuff? : ) Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Affaire a Burlesque Chateau a Go-Go" by Bella Butchery
- "Your images are still swirling in my head. Bleeding girls and peacock feathers. Original. It took me a bit to realize you were rhyming. I think your use of rhyming was done well here. Spread out far enough as not to seem elementary. More new posts please"
Posted by spikedwithLUST on "Affaire a Burlesque Chateau a Go-Go" by Bella Butchery
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