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"Genius. And I second Cara's comments. You deserve to have a much higher profile here -Carl"
Posted by carlosjackal on "the bic memorial" by shortandpretentious

"Ah, love it! Yet another piece of proof to back up my decision to fave you and another piece that gets me thinking, "Why the fuck isn't everyone else faving you" -Carl"
Posted by carlosjackal on "lovely dark and deep" by shortandpretentious

"I've read this many times now but only now feel like I'm ready to comment. I can only echo everyone else and add this was magnificent magic created in so few lines. Amazing -Carl"
Posted by carlosjackal on "Rain & Jazz in Rm 272" by shortandpretentious

"This seems to be a miss of something, almost unfinished. However, your use of words paints a beautiful image. Is there more to this?"
Posted by DowngradeBeauty on "suite" by shortandpretentious

"I found this through mozarts cat whose taste is impeccable and this....oh my gwads....beatific as the woman who guided me ...rain my cure; love washed upon timeless streets..."
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Rain & Jazz in Rm 272" by shortandpretentious

"short and to the point. loved it. great write ~*~Tart~*~"
Posted by Kinkypoptart on "for denise, the artist" by shortandpretentious

"then again, on second thought it looks exactly that way serrated claimed...either way good work"
Posted by Solace on "metaphor" by shortandpretentious

"I cannot help but feel that serratedsoul has missed the point, as far as my tired mind can tell, this is about being the airbag, attempting to save people who are inevitably going to wind up a self-portrait..."
Posted by Solace on "metaphor" by shortandpretentious

"This is short and deservedly so as one night is so short and yet so packed with images...admirable punch of imagery, loved the acoustic gone electric line..."
Posted by Solace on "Columbia is the new Newport" by shortandpretentious

"I loved this, the two pronged invasion of the mind, and the poet sits and watches all the while...a superb piece of literature..."
Posted by Solace on "prepared for war & the ghosts to follow" by shortandpretentious

"this is awesome. I too found it on Purr's homepage. Magnificent write... the last line gave me the broadest grin I've worn all week."
Posted by flying_fox on "Rain & Jazz in Rm 272" by shortandpretentious

"gah. i love this. i found it on purr's profile a while ago, and i've been at a loss for words. this is just marvelous."
Posted by Unknown on "Rain & Jazz in Rm 272" by shortandpretentious

"well, it was 2004 when I first found this piece; this is just a little postscript to say that these days I can recite it verbatim, and it runs in my memory at all sorts of moments. It's magnificent."
Posted by purr_verse on "Rain & Jazz in Rm 272" by shortandpretentious

"nice."
Posted by AHHH on "the 1, 4, 5 progression" by shortandpretentious

"i love this poem coz its leaping out to me in flames and leaving me with the winter chills. how i feel for...is what u have sketched in words. thanks!"
Posted by squench on "in the moment" by shortandpretentious

"I never thought anybody could write about a pen.....but you did and you did it very good "
Posted by Unknown on "the bic memorial" by shortandpretentious

"so don't stop fighting. YOU are shaping your tomorrows, so FIGHT, fight for your life. don't be some stuffed scarecrow, flopping about in the wind. ~lauren~"
Posted by xserratedsoulx on "metaphor" by shortandpretentious

"i have to disagree with your submission to fate. you sound like you've surrendered and are ready to let this 'fate' lead you where it may. your life is your own."
Posted by xserratedsoulx on "metaphor" by shortandpretentious

"that's brutal. ~lauren~"
Posted by xserratedsoulx on "in the moment" by shortandpretentious

"Very well wrote. Wish this one was longer but none-the-less, very good."
Posted by SorrowSoul on "Columbia is the new Newport" by shortandpretentious

"amazing stuff"
Posted by dp_whipping_girl on "lovely dark and deep" by shortandpretentious

"sweet -kitty"
Posted by Sticky Kitty on "lovely dark and deep" by shortandpretentious

"You are an outstanding writer. This is exceptionally well-crafted. "
Posted by purr_verse on "prepared for war & the ghosts to follow" by shortandpretentious

"ahh, this is awesome.... so full on and energetic, I love the imagery, the feel, the sounds..... vivid and inspiring. Thank you."
Posted by Lotophagi on "prepared for war & the ghosts to follow" by shortandpretentious

"i agree with solace.......it brings forth fast intelligence.........well done urban"
Posted by urbanhumility on "the 1, 4, 5 progression" by shortandpretentious

"Heh. "If you want a lover, I'll do anything you ask me to." Loved this."
Posted by Carmina Gitana on "emotional dildo turned angry former lover" by shortandpretentious

"i love this...very creative and unique"
Posted by Unknown on "metaphor" by shortandpretentious

"damn... "
Posted by MyBrokenMynd on "metaphor" by shortandpretentious

"Awesome image, thick description, how about continuation? No blame though, I do a lot of short pieces too. It'd just be fun to have more instead of only a teaser."
Posted by Liz on "Columbia is the new Newport" by shortandpretentious

"Not bad at all..."
Posted by Dancing_Monkey on "a photograph for sheets and digallo" by shortandpretentious

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