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  • "This poem is immensely clever metaphorically speaking. It was a smooth read :-) but I don't share the sentiment, as I don't really believe in fate. But sometimes, when I am down, this is how it can feel, when things are not going your way , so this is a good poem for those times! Well done for poem of the day, shorthand pretentious"
    Posted by Stephanie Sideways on "metaphor" by shortandpretentious
  • "Man some people can write about anything and make it so beautiful, I'm in love with this poem. For some reason I can't stop reading it over and over and it leaves this sad aftertaste in my mouth. Still, this is perfection."
    Posted by Dreaming in Stanzas on "the bic memorial" by shortandpretentious
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