Comments by All Members
- "i've tried commenting on this for days... i just can't. it hurts too much to think, to remember, to recognize the depths of your mourning and know there is nothing i can do to help. i hope she's at peace, too... and that eventually, you kind find your own semblance of it here. beautiful tribute, sweetheart."
Posted by Unknown on "Hanging by her tHrEADs" by NarcissusNarcosis
- "It's incredibly hard to comment on your non-fiction. I am sure I am not the only one fumbling with something that will deliver comforting compliments. Instead, I hope this attaches as more of a reminder of the spread out support you have. You are lovely."
Posted by Maladroit on "Hanging by her tHrEADs" by NarcissusNarcosis
- "This reminds me of when I first moved to the states, back home we don't have titles such as jocks, goths etc everyone hangs out together at school at lunch where as here in the states the cafeteria is divided into sub groups. I knew nothing about this and so I hung out and got along with everyone it didn't matter what group it was. Just goes to show you don't have to conform to anyone particular group etc. I've always done my own thing and it's because of this that I am the person I am today. Thanks for re-posting this it is much appreciated."
Posted by Gray Vision on "Mechanicophobia" by NarcissusNarcosis
- "This write is very mind boggling, I had to read this a couple times and will most likely read it again here and there to see what more I can get out of it. I don't play cards much but now as I truly think about it, it does make sense one side of either is shown and the flip is merely a reflection of the same side. Like you mention the queen can move anywhere she wants but stays put, this made me think of movies like Gladiator and Troy where the kings as well as their pawns come and go and the queens remains. Aside from another fact that by majority women out live men there's so much that can be said about this piece, well done and thank you for sharing."
Posted by Gray Vision on "The Red Queen and The Suicide King" by NarcissusNarcosis
- "I want to bookmark it like the other 588429 people - but color me anything but trendy- read this like a year book- "Bethany wuz here, she'll be back.""
Posted by Maladroit on "Color Me..." by NarcissusNarcosis
- "limb.o (maybe?) - marvelous visions painted darkly and deeply, and that lake burns (don't forget your water wings, or do they call them swimmies, or floaties now?) Cheers and one of your best!"
Posted by dwells on "WritingMyOwnEnding" by NarcissusNarcosis
- "Very different from the norm but altogether i liked your piece. The imaging is striking in a sort in your face way, straight up. Great work please do more."
Posted by Unknown on "WritingMyOwnEnding" by NarcissusNarcosis
- "I typically sidestep your work- and this is a compliment, hear me out- I have nothing in common with your writing or your life (assuming you write non fiction)- but every now and then you write relatable to the unrelative. I think that's the best compliment I could wish to get- is to write to an audience who can't relate to shit I say yet still strike a nerve.. And that's what you did here, so I hope you also find it complimentary "
Posted by Maladroit on "WritingMyOwnEnding" by NarcissusNarcosis
- "nice, a dante reference. this made me feel, and i'm quite numb, so that's impressive but not surprising. you always make ripples in the puddle of my soul. this made me feel like drowning. xo"
Posted by Unknown on "WritingMyOwnEnding" by NarcissusNarcosis
- "This was very deep and intense. Sometimes we feel like we just get to the point where there isn't possibly anymore we can take, but i like to believe that we are never given more than we are able to handle in life. I hope everything is okay. This was very well written xoxo"
Posted by xZombie Poptartzx on "WritingMyOwnEnding" by NarcissusNarcosis
- "Oh, to color one indeed....I'd use the hues of your mind's own landscape to paint these colors, because those are the only ones that would ever do."
Posted by ColourGod on "Color Me..." by NarcissusNarcosis
- "wow... don't we all regret how nice we are to people so undeserving? They drain us of our energy and suffocate us with their clingy grip yet unappreciative of kindness shown. Honesty sometimes is the only way to breath again even though it means watching them chock on their own lies and pretense. Beautiful :)"
Posted by Gothchic on "Hold your breath..." by NarcissusNarcosis
- "I can relate to this very well. I could say more but I'd be here all night. This was very well done and an overall excellent piece NN. Awesome. Later - "
Posted by Sean Mc Shane on "Color Me..." by NarcissusNarcosis
- "Damn!! This one hit me in the kisser.. fuck me. the lat few lines set a scene that almost makes addiction more than appetizing. .. you mind fuck me everytime you post.. that is what makes it worth logging in. "
Posted by Devilish on "Date Rape Psychosis" by NarcissusNarcosis
[Next]
