Comments by All Members
- "Keep rolling that rock up the hill every day and maybe some night it won't roll back down! Your songspeak is superfluously superb and much enjoyed. The flow was great! (HA)"
Posted by dwells on "Sex With A Dictionary!" by NarcissusNarcosis
- "I know how this feels.. For the last 2-3 months i've been in this depressed rut and i can't seem to get the fuck out of it.. "Do you ever get so tired
that you can't even sleep
anxiety and nervous wired
through bloodshot eyes, the world is bleak..." that part especially.. i know exactly what thats like. being tired as fuck but laying there with your eyes closed for hours not being able to sleep... it gets to the point where sleeping pills wont even do the trick. Nice write,, i feel ya xoxo"
Posted by xZombie Poptartzx on "Vicious Cycle" by NarcissusNarcosis
- "Even when you write like this i can't help but to wanna feel you slide around the top of me maybe cut my skin and let the blood drip in side out of me. i feel you though . a viscous cycle is a perfect fucking title. "
Posted by Devilish on "Vicious Cycle" by NarcissusNarcosis
- "A new favorite, wow...that last stanza brought it all together and made me choke. I wanna say more, much more about the depth of raw emotion this piece invokes, ...maybe later - XXOO"
Posted by Nehema on "Air-Conditioned Hell" by NarcissusNarcosis
- "Do the meds help, or maybe only make it worse I wonder? Side effects possibly similar to operant conditioning when rats are forced into an over-crowded environment. Adreno-corticoid steroids spike in reaction to the stress, and much the same as you describe in this piece. We all need our space, sometimes more - sometimes less. OK now leave $50 with the receptionist and I'll see you next week, cheers NN!"
Posted by dwells on "Vicious Cycle" by NarcissusNarcosis
- "Seems like the depression bug is going around. All you can do is get lost. So lost that you forget how stranded you feel. You're luckier than you think. This is all temporary. Nice write"
Posted by dramamine on "Vicious Cycle" by NarcissusNarcosis
- "I love this.It's raw and emotional and speaks volumes in these few chosen lines. Everyone feels this way at one point or another....we all just tend to handle our pain differently. Beautiful write NN : )"
Posted by andhaka on "Vicious Cycle" by NarcissusNarcosis
- "This slices straight to my heart causing it to bleed a river ;(~ This raw unbridled emotion is crushing, to say the least...You're not alone !!! ~^_^~ Perfect in presentation:)~"
Posted by blue angel on "Vicious Cycle" by NarcissusNarcosis
- "This is an unbelievably powerful piece for many. The mind tends to be our biggest enemy when we can't just make it stop. Life is in a constant state of change and motion, our only option remaining is to let go and adapt to that which comes our way..."
Posted by FearlessDragon on "Vicious Cycle" by NarcissusNarcosis
- "over manipulative eyes
no contrition
if you see misery
you take advantage
every compliment you throw
is backhanded...
So conniving ... itching for a fix.. that is how i feel about you .. when i read you i start wanting to scratch that itch then taste it. color me blank and black then slide inside.. i want to come find that demon you hide. if only i could get to you . fuck me. "
Posted by Devilish on "Incubus Mentality" by NarcissusNarcosis
- "to infect me...
It is a demoralization
that is against my will
a defeat rendered
from the devil's deal
nothing remaining
for death to steal
a void only
more emptiness can fill
until my tiny victories
become infinite kills..... FUCK YEAH!! touch me please hurry up before i die.. damn it i wanna drink your saliva.. "
Posted by Devilish on "Air-Conditioned Hell" by NarcissusNarcosis
- "Wait until the electric bill comes, then you will get a glimpse of the next level of Hell, and it will only get worse with the new EPA regs, but it's part of the master plan to break the system, and then re-create into the ideal. Sorry NN for the verbosity, this could be one of your best - like grape juice into wine, cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "Air-Conditioned Hell" by NarcissusNarcosis
- "Happiness is a virus we all hope to catch but yet we build walls round us, keeping our demons inside, protecting our personal gates of hell. Air Con would be nice, its so damn hot down here ;) awesome piece"
Posted by MissAngelic on "Air-Conditioned Hell" by NarcissusNarcosis
- "Very deep... The ending was a bit unexpected. "plagiaristic and falsified unity
bathing in your perceived impunity
You will die alone
melting on
your unrepentant throne..." I loved those lines.... Often we are our own worst enemies... iknow i've spent a great deal of time hating myself. xoxo"
Posted by xZombie Poptartzx on "Incubus Mentality" by NarcissusNarcosis
- "Every incubus needs a succubus, now I gotta look up "dudgeon", thanks NN! Great surprise ending I didn't see coming and very insightful in retrospect, cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "Incubus Mentality" by NarcissusNarcosis
- "Sweet incubus :)~ A devil staring back at you from the mirror.... I wonder of a succubus hiding there as well... Better check the dark corners, :)~ Damn I love this write !!! Perfect as always :)"
Posted by blue angel on "Incubus Mentality" by NarcissusNarcosis
- "this is... for lack of a better word.. beautiful.. its so deep, but yet shallow. a good look at the mind of its creator ^_^"
Posted by Unknown on "Color Me..." by NarcissusNarcosis
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