Comments by All Members
- "Well this is thought provoking. At first my mind flashed on children playing amid a deserted battleground, then it slammed forward to harder, even less pleasant pictures. ~ mw"
Posted by manywalks on "Alas" by Mistress Morbid
- "Wow, very disturbing and so thick with imagery. And so true, the world is destroying it's self with growing violence, and all for nothing. Amazing write Morb, really amazing. ~L"
Posted by Lynaes on "Alas" by Mistress Morbid
- "Bloodshed for nothing. We live to kill, not to die, which is what is wrong with life. Wonderful piece Miss Morbid, maybe we should buy an island and start our own life, and then nuke the world. :-D"
Posted by Six-Out on "Alas" by Mistress Morbid
- "that was awesome, I love the imagery in this, you painted a very dark picture for me. nice work ~serpentine~"
Posted by Unknown on "Alas" by Mistress Morbid
- "...of course I have lost my marbles...for some reason that line wrapped this up very neatly; darkly, without compassion, but neatly. One I'll have to reread to fully savor it. ~ mw"
Posted by manywalks on "Ounce Of Pain" by Mistress Morbid
- "Wow, very disturbing, and also a beautiful expression of what can go on underneath a person's visage, stunning imagery, I loved this. ~L"
Posted by Lynaes on "Ounce Of Pain" by Mistress Morbid
- "Third to last stanza was particularly tasty though the entire poem was great. I tried to make a voodoo doll out of my thumb- hotdog man style- once but it didn't work. Nice work:) ~Ryan"
Posted by Unknown on "Ounce Of Pain" by Mistress Morbid
- "The thought you express is excellent, I think you should ditch the rhymes and not force the piece to conform."
Posted by Unknown on "Blinded" by Mistress Morbid
- "_goodness...i get this disturbing vision of you in my head...pulling out your hair and making a voodoo doll...this is heavy.we pray for pain to feel alive.-tim"
Posted by suicideseason on "Ounce Of Pain" by Mistress Morbid
- "Things only ever get worse before they get better, for sure. And the healing process is just as painful and heart wrenching as the initial warfare, or what have you. Last stanza was great."
Posted by Unknown on "Ounce Of Pain" by Mistress Morbid
- "Ahh...the chills recede, slowly. This is how I feel. You can't express love through words, you have to show it through actions. A love poem is only a verbal gurantee. Words are kind of like insurance, it assures you. Great write."
Posted by Liath on " *" by Mistress Morbid
- "Woahahaha. True indeed. But what can you do? the little headliner at the top of the Page IS :.DarkPoetry.com.::. - It's expected to have that sort of played out cliche mood from people."
Posted by Liath on "DP's Insecurities" by Mistress Morbid
- "Very interesting. I didn't really expect the going to heaven part though, but a nice twist there at the end. I enjoy your material, Morbid. =)"
Posted by Liath on "I bid you adieu" by Mistress Morbid
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