Comments by All Members
- "I think epochalypse has Rhymer Envy. Whos gives a flying fuck about your style; it's yours do with with whatever the hell you want. This was a damn good poem, regardless of anything (I hope that sounds like a compliment; it was supposed to)."
Posted by Unknown on "Six Feet Deep" by Tangent Ponderings
- "i think i got the point trying to be made....i could be wrong though...but i like it...~YeStErDaY~"
Posted by -Oz- on "Gone" by Tangent Ponderings
- "wow the thoughts that have run through everyone's head so many times before put so delicatly into words....liking this....~YeStErDaY~"
Posted by -Oz- on "Love Me" by Tangent Ponderings
- "Everyone else is wrong... the poem is good, the idea is good, but the rhymes are forced. Let go of ABAB, and control your rhymes... don't let them control your words ;)"
Posted by stormtalk on "Six Feet Deep" by Tangent Ponderings
- "have you ever considered small woodland rodents? They dont talk as much and their a lot cheaper to date. Just need some nuts......."
Posted by Drifter on "Love Me" by Tangent Ponderings
- "i must say this is not what i expected from a poet names bob the mailman.quite incredible!"I hope for the best
But expect the worst
My life a tragedy
One giant curse"well put!i love this.write more.~season
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Posted by suicideseason on "Six Feet Deep" by Tangent Ponderings