Comments by All Members
- "i like the end, but the whole poem was very suspensful and i liked most of it.. some parts i could do with out, i just choose to say what.. otherwise it wouldn't be your true work.. anyways, good write"
Posted by mywristshurt on "LoSt In My OwN nIgHtMaRe" by Tangent Ponderings
- "if you're talking to me(b/c my real name is rose) than thanks for the poem.. b/c im a natural blonde and my eyes are blue.. anyways, i liked the poem.. maybe cause it has my name in it so much.. lol"
Posted by mywristshurt on "My Rose" by Tangent Ponderings
- "good flow, I do think this poem might have better impact if you added at least a few sylibles to each line.....the poems perfectly fine as it is though"
Posted by Unknown on "Emptiness" by Tangent Ponderings
- "I was about to give up on this until the last couple of stanzas added a great positive note. I especially can relate to the 'only myself to forgive' stanza. Nicely done. ~Ship!"
Posted by Unknown on "Six Feet Deep" by Tangent Ponderings
[Next]
